Sky Pride
Chapter 46- Attacked With Cakes
- Chapter 20- A Question of Will
- Chapter 19- A Quiet Word With A Heretic
- Chapter 18- Beating With Sticks, Slapping With Hands, Part 1
- Chapter 17- Are We Fighting Wrong?
- Chapter 16- Biting Serpent and Heavy Stick
- Chapter 15- Fort Askarmand
- Chapter 14- Green Grass or Red Sand?
- Chapter 13- The Intermediation of an Eagle
- Chapter 12- An Inadequate Weed
- Chapter 11- Into the Sea of Grass
- Chapter 10- Storm on the Grassland
- Chapter 9- The Children of the Endless Blue Sky
- Chapter 8- Mourning and Evening
- Chapter 7- Unresigned Hou
- Chapter 6- Hell Wager
- Chapter 5- The Burden of Choice
- Chapter 4- Putting Together Broken Clay to Make a Cup
- Chapter 3- Blazing City
- Chapter 2- Thunder from a Clear Blue Sky
- Sky Pride Vol. Chapter 7 Chapter 1- Completing a Rescue Starts With Burglary
- Epilogue III- Two Birds of a Feather
- Epilogue II- Talented Siblings on Parallel Paths
- Epilogue I- Filial Piety, Reconsidered
- Chapter 55- Banditry is Harder Than It Looks
- Chapter 54- Productive Hours
- Chapter 53- Descent of the Gods
- Chapter 52- A Strayed Goddess Plots Murder
- Chapter 51- Immortals Drunk on Moonlight
- Chapter 50- Common Clay
- Chapter 49- Promising Youth
- Chapter 48- An Immortal Tutor
- Chapter 47- The Importance of Proper Education
- Chapter 46- The Strength of the Steppes
- Chapter 45- The Procession of the King of Hell
- Chapter 44- The Consequences of Doing the Right Things
- Chapter 43- Descending on Burning Flag City Once More
- Chapter 42- The Calling of Blood
- Chapter 41- Leaving in a Rush, Arriving Like You Never Left
- Chapter 40- Medicine Saint Jun and the Street Sweeping Mendicants
- Chapter 39- The Limits of a Trainee Doctor
- Chapter 38- The Kindness of Strangers
- Chapter 37- The Trouble With New Tools
- Chapter 36- Burning Bright
- Chapter 35- Revisiting Grievances
- Chapter 34- Making "Friends"
- Chapter 33- Learning to Fly
- Chapter 32- Healing
- Chapter 31- Are We Heretics Now?
- Chapter 30- Finally Getting It
- Chapter 29- Mermaid Silk
- Chapter 28- Finding Leads, and Gathering Supplies
- Chapter 27- The Greasiness of the Merchant Class
- Chapter 26- Mountain Gate City
- Chapter 25- The Foxes’ Tails are Hard to Hide
- Chapter 24- Stepping out onto a broader stage
- Chapter 23- The Vast Darknorth Sea Art
- Chapter 22- A Fortune Gathering Toad. All Kinds of Fortune.
- Chapter 21- Friends in Damp Places
- Chapter 20- The Evolution of Arts
- Chapter 19- Exploring a New Realm
- Chapter 18- The Education of Saints
- Chapter 17- Revelation of the Saints
- Chapter 16- The Human Vessel is Empty
- Chapter 15- The Music of Time Together
- Chapter 14- What Kind of Teachers Are These?
- Chapter 13- The Intersection of Diagnosis and Weeding
- Chapter 12- Growth, Broadly Defined
- Chapter 11- Sowing Fate
- Chapter 10- What Fortune Gathers
- Chapter 9- How Heavy a Dream
- My book is being pirated on Amazon (Update- Publishers are on it)
- Chapter 8- Sound and Color
- Chapter 7- Just a Stick with Some Holes and the Dao in it
- Chapter 6- Pretty Songbirds All in a Row
- Chapter 5- Qualifications of a Clenched Fist and an Open Palm
- Chapter 4- The Poison Called Doubt
- Chapter 3- Confident is a Strong Word
- Chapter 2- Every Test is One of Character
- Vol. Chapter 6 Chapter 1- Impatience
- Epilogue II- Soft Rice is the Tastiest
- Epilogue I- The King of Hell and his Book Carrying Servant
- Chapter 49- Word From On High
- Chapter 48- The Responsibilities of a Senior Brother
- Chapter 47- The Bindings of Past and Future
- Chapter 46- The Arrival of Consequences
- Chapter 45- Run or Fight or Both
- Chapter 44- A Heavenly Bird
- Chapter 43- The Princess Pierces the Sky
- Chapter 42- Expected Conclusions
- Chapter 41- Speaking Plainly
- Chapter 40- Sweet Reason
- Chapter 39- Placing the Toad in the Hole
- Chapter 38- The Many Flavors of Fortune
- Chapter 37- Bad Daoists Trying to be Better
- Chapter 36- Negotiations with a Tough Toad
- Chapter 35- Green Stone, Red Eyes
- Chapter 34- Many Ways to Show You Care
- Chapter 33- We Are What We Say We Are
- Chapter 32- Necessary Words
- Chapter 31- Blazing Heart Saint, Tempered Sunforged Phisique
- Chapter 30- Joining Hands Against The Heavens
- Chapter 29- Foundations Fit for a Heaven-Piercing Pagoda
- Chapter 28- A Yang Man
- Chapter 27- Close Enough to Taste, Far Enough to Kill
- Chapter 26- Finding the True Metal Between Fire and Water
- Chapter 25- The Simian Complaint
- Chapter 24- The Door of Contradiction
- Chapter 23- A Yin Man
- Chapter 22- A Study of Yang and Families
- Chapter 21- Stone Forest
- Chapter 20- Fire and Water
- Chapter 19- Falling Towards The Valley
- Chapter 18- The Irascible Sister Lin
- Chapter 17- A New Way of Fighting
- Chapter 16- Gathering the Young Experts
- Chapter 15- Struggling Mountain Folk
- Chapter 14- Making Do With What You Have
- Chapter 13- Moon Crossing the Lake
- Chapter 12- Digesting Gains and Losses
- Chapter 11- Dragon and Tiger Contending
- Chapter 10- The Use of a Sect
- Chapter 9- Some Reward
- Chapter 8- Bitten By a Ghost
- Chapter 7- A Tea Failure
- Chapter 6- How to Climb a Magic Mountain
- Chapter 5- A Home That Trains Your Heart
- Chapter 4- Awkward Farewell
- Chapter 3- Proof of Growth
- Chapter 2- Real Boxing
- Sky Pride Vol. Chapter 5 Chapter 1- King of a Short Hill
- Vol. Chapter 4 Epilogue II
- Vol. Chapter 4 Epilogue I
- Chapter 51- The Daoists Return to Simplicity
- Chapter 50- Standing at the Peak, Seeing Only Despair
- Chapter 49- Clearing The Mountain Gate
- Chapter 48- Blowing on a Cooling Ember
- Chapter 47- Eating Rice Today
- Chapter 46- How Terrible a Dead Heart
- Chapter 45- Finding What Matters
- Chapter 44- Debating the Dao
- Chapter 43- Racing Home
- Chapter 42- Bleeding Fortune
- Chapter 41- Hearing the True Dao Preached in the Morning
- Chapter 40- Choosing Your Family
- Chapter 39- Making a Name for One’s Self
- For those who didn’t read the Author Note- On vacation until Dec. 8
- Chapter 38- The Advantages of Being Useless
- Chapter 37- Dragged into the Light
- Chapter 36- What Was Lost and What Was Found
- Chapter 35- What Would You Pay For Your Family?
- Chapter 34- The Ingratitude of a Junior
- Chapter 33- Fiery Sky Soup
- Chapter 32- Pain, Past, Present and Future
- Chapter 31- Who You Find When You Are Alone In The Dark
- Chapter 30- Holding to Hope Too Long
- Chapter 29- Hooked on Acacia Thorns
- Chapter 28- A Chance to Change Fate
- Chapter 27- Letters From Eight Directions
- Chapter 26- Ominous Isn’t Always a Bad Sign
- Chapter 25- Glorious Pillage
- Chapter 24- The Wrath of the Gardener
- Chapter 23- A Matter of Merit
- Chapter 22- Shrine of the Northwest General
- Chapter 21- The Burning Sky Cranes
- Chapter 20- Memory Etched in Bone
- Chapter 19- The Difficulty of Simple Things
- Chapter 18- The Qualifications of a Ghost
- Chapter 17- Necessary Rituals
- Chapter 16- Untrustworthy Fortune
- Chapter 15- A Dream To Break An Empire
- Chapter 14- The Winecellar of the Copper Roof Inn
- Chapter 13- Eating Steel
- Chapter 12- A Dinner Full of Struggle
- Chapter 11- The Copper Roof Inn
- Chapter 10- Plunging into the Broad Sky Kingdom
- Chapter 9- The Difficulties of a Golden Fish
- Chapter 8- Merits, Earned and Otherwise
- Chapter 7- Red Blood on Blue Cobble Streets
- Chapter 6- Cranes Descend on Bluestone City
- Chapter 5- The Noble Vanguard
- Chapter 4- Familiar Business
- Chapter 3- Bitter Water
- Chapter 2- Rushing Along The Agate
- Chapter 1- Young Cranes in Flight
- Vol Chapter 3. Epilogue
- Chapter 55- A Cup Full of Dao
- Chapter 54- The Blood Red Battlefield
- Chapter 53- The Teachings of War King Cho
- Chapter 52- Who Chooses To Stand Under A Collapsing Wall?
- Chapter 51- Hideous Things
- Chapter 50- What A Good Array Can Do
- Chapter 49- Survival is a Weapon All on it’s Own
- Chapter 48- Gearing Up and Sorting Out
- Chapter 47- The Art of Carrying Crushing Weight
- Chapter 46- Attacked With Cakes
- Chapter 45- Generous Hosts
- Chapter 44- One’s Own Time
- Chapter 43- A Few Friendly Wagers
- Chapter 42- Dinner, Abbreviated
- Chapter 41- Descending on the Courtyard
- I’m on vacation, and will return on the 15th
- Chapter 40- Blessings Coming Together
- Chapter 39- Moonlit Lessons
- Chapter 38- The Gaps In Your Mind
- Chapter 37- The Weight of an Ancient Name
- Chapter 36- Learning to Talk
- Chapter 35- Not Just Enemies Meet on a Narrow Path
- Chapter 34- Beware Seniors Bearing Gifts
- Chapter 33- Meeting Royalty
- Chapter 32- Messages From Above
- Chapter 31- Charting the Sky
- Chapter 30- Selling the Dao
- Chapter 29- Making Friends With Your Fists
- Chapter 28- A Quick Stop At A Volcano
- Chapter 27- Business Opportunities
- Chapter 26- The Tiger Appreciation Society
- Chapter 25- The Strength of a Doctor
- Chapter 24- Disgraceful Sparring
- Chapter 23- Young Master Tian
- Chapter 22- A Peaceful Life of Cultivation
- Chapter 21- The Bamboo Medicine Hut
- Chapter 20- Thoughts Like A Mountain Stream
- Chapter 19- Choking on Mortal Air
- Chapter 18- Finding Today’s Limit
- Chapter 17- A Rock Worth More Than A Kingdom
- Chapter 16- A Fairy With Bloody Knuckles
- Chapter 15- Gone But Not Forgotten
- Chapter 14- Trading Heads
- Chapter 13- A Local Snake
- Chapter 12- Flowing Water Becoming a Landslide
- Chapter 11- The Smokey Shadow of the Demon
- Chapter 10- Exploding Bad People
- Chapter 9- A Daoist in the Garrison
- Chapter 8- The Red Plume General
- Chapter 7- The Second Supreme Virtue
- Chapter 6- Making Human Noises, Spotting Immortal Traps
- Chapter 5- Making New Friends
- Chapter 4- Strangers With Familiar Faces
- Chapter 3- Broken Emissaries
- Chapter 2- First Under The Heavens
- Vol. Chapter 3 - Chapter 1- Unrivaled Since Ancient Times
- Chapter 55- A Father in Old Age
- Chapter 54- A Son’s Love
- Chapter 53- A Five Colored Road To Eternity
- Chapter 52- An Eternal Dao
- Chapter 51- A Five Dimensional Attack
- Chapter 50- Cutting to the Heart of Things
- Chapter 49- Needle Sharp
- Chapter 48- Unfortunate Strength
- Chapter 47- Blazing in the Dark
- Chapter 46- What It Means To Burn
- Chapter 45- Embracing Yang
- Chapter 44- Burning Heart, Frozen Guts
- Chapter 43- One Fifth of Everything
- Chapter 42- Northern Soldier
- Chapter 41- Dropped Straight Into It
- Since some people missied the note- I’m back on the 23’rd.
- Chapter 40- Six Turns
- Chapter 39- With Open Hands
- Chapter 38- The Nature of Instruction
- Chapter 37- The Gentle Art of Taking A Hit
- Chapter 36- Growing Inside and Out
- Chapter 35- The First of the Three Treasures
- Chapter 34- Just a Momentary Joy
- Chapter 33- The Expectations of an Attentive Senior
- Chapter 32- Wiggling A New Finger
- Chapter 31- What Is Cultivated Is the Self
- Chapter 30- Bloody Money, Painful Merits
- Chapter 29- Hero
- Chapter 28- A Gentleman Can Wait Ten Years for Vengeance
- Chapter 27- Manufacturing Quality Goods
- Chapter 26- Planted On The Back Line
- Chapter 25- A Straight Answer to a Simple Question
- Chapter 24- Long Range Acupuncture
- Chapter 23- Building an Arsenal
- Chapter 22- It’s A Web, Not a Chain
- Chapter 21- “Glorious” Victory
- Chapter 20- Each Unique Suffering Life
- Chapter 19- Burning Wild
- Chapter 18- Into The Wind
- Chapter 17- A Child Carrying Gold In The Market
- Chapter 16- What Every Adventure Needs
- Chapter 15- The Calculations of Heavenly People
- Chapter 14- Pest Control
- Chapter 13- Men Die for Gold
- Chapter 12- Birds Die For Food...
- Chapter 11- The Demon Called Money
- Just wanted to say thank you
- Chapter 10- Life and Death and Somewhere In Between
- Chapter 9- What Makes A Cultivator?
- Chapter 8- A Long Night Brings Many Dreams
- Chapter 7- A Medic In The Field
- Chapter 6- The Long Patrol
- Chapter 5- Refusing The Toast
- Chapter 4- Nothing Personal
- Chapter 3- The Line Between Necessary and Good
- Chapter 2- Purity is in the Mind of the Beholder
- Chapter 1- The Supreme Virtue Hell Suppressing Body Refining Sutra, and Losing a War
- Chapter 50- Raising Spears For A Long War
- Chapter 49- Heart Eating Hate
- Chapter 48- No Role But Victim
- Chapter 47- What Defines A Heretic
- Chapter 46- Waking Up
- Chapter 45- An Unpolished Jade
- Chapter 44- The Heart of Tea
- Chapter 43- Debating the Dao of Cruelty
- Chapter 42- Hell is What You Make of It
- Chapter 41- One Line Between Life and Death, Then and Now
- Chapter 40- Solitary Hunters of the Evil Path
- Chapter 39- An Opportunity to Excel
- Chapter 38- Enemies Meet on a Narrow Path
- Chapter 37- Meeting The Enemy
- Tax Evasion In The Fantasy World [April Fools Chapter]
- Chapter 36- First Combat Patrol
- Chapter 35- First Journey Through the Sky
- Chapter 34- A Boy Goes to War
- Chapter 33- Partially Grown Immortals
- Chapter 32- The Weight of the Word “Brother”
- Chapter 31- The Sound of an Oncoming Storm [Special Note At The End!]
- Chapter 30- The Lay Sisters Promise They Will Be Gentle
- Chapter 29- The Difference Between Heaven and Earth
- Chapter 28- Embracing the Wild Sky
- Chapter 27- Picking Poison
- Chapter 26- Moral Development
- Alright, this momentum is crazy. We gotta keep it going. More chaps coming this weekend
- Chapter 25- Brutal Methods of the Righteous
- Chapter 24- A Child Doing Wetwork
- Chapter 23- Mission Demon
- Chapter 22- Silently Taking a Life
- Chapter 21- “You Made Us Wait, Junior Brother!”
- Chapter 20- The Delicate Art of Enmity
- Chapter 19- A Rock Thrower Called Hong
- Chapter 18- The Dreadfulness of a Vine
- Chapter 17- A Tree to Fill The Sky
- Chapter 16- A Touch of Death
- Front page of Rising Stars in Six Days! So have evidence of my dark history...
- Chapter 15- At the Foot of an Endless Mountain
- Chapter 14- Dressing Human
- Chapter 13- Wolf Child Eyes The Sheep
- Chapter 12- Dustless Physique
- Chapter 11- Lotus Above, Snake Below
- Chapter 10- Ruthless Child
- Chapter 9- Lotuses Root in Tragedy
- Chapter 8- Pointing A Sword At Heaven
- Chapter 7- What’s Swimming?
- Chapter 6- Eating Treasure with Broken Teeth
- Chapter 5- Child of Destiny
- Chapter 4- First Steps on the Path
- Chapter 3- Junkyard Classroom, Trash Heap Hospital
- Chapter 2- Gourmet in the Garbage
- Chapter 1- In the Care of a Hateful God
Tian thought Level Ten of the array might be his limit, which was irritating. It really shouldn’t be this hard, teamwork or not. There was blatantly a trick to it, but his hosts didn’t volunteer what it might be. He just kept dodging and trying to use the techniques Lin had provided to keep the crane engaged.
It was the crane that inadvertently discovered the secret. Beams of fire and water qi were coming at her head from two directions. She ducked at the last minute, and the beams collided, then vanished.
“Cycle of generation and restraint! Aha!” Tian grinned.
“Oh well done! I was quite worried for a while there.” Oily greased at him, but his itchy words couldn’t shake Tian’s happy mood. The discovery opened up so many options. Getting beams to cancel each other out was an obvious one, but he could see the number of beams only increasing at higher levels. Using metal to generate water to block fire, or wood to fuel fire and melt metal, were potential options. The real test would be doing that while pushing the beams of qi around and into each other, rather than relying on footwork.
“Oh, that’s why over Level Fifteen is Heavenly Person only. It’s not that the attacks get stronger, it’s because you need to control and redirect the energy to pass the levels. Something you can’t really do without external qi manipulation. A sort of high speed puzzle, getting more complicated the further you advance. Fun.”
Oily’s look changed from patronizing to startled, before quickly settling back. Doughy remained stoic, but nodded slightly. “Yep.”
Tian rubbed his hands. “On to Level Eleven. I am curious to see how far I can go.”
Oily sneered while he made the adjustments. “Yes, Level Ten is a bit embarrassing for a Daoist of your… notable accomplishments.”
Tian let the barb hang out in the air. He had noticed the young cultivator had been fiddling with his compass while he was struggling in the field. Manipulation of the beams seemed an obvious possibility. He was probably tasked with humiliating Tian and “blunting his momentum” or some other overly complicated nonsense.
And if that was the case, then Doughy was here for the same purpose. He didn’t seem to be involved in this challenge, so he was probably setting up for whatever came next.
Tian ran the possibilities as he guided the crane, the two working together to turn the rays against each other. It took careful timing and sharp dodging, but that was the point of all this- coordination and training. He hid a smile. The harder they went at him, the more intensely they trained him. He really couldn’t ask for better.
“Level Twelve, please.” The Snow Grace Crane was picking up on what he was communicating better than ever. It was to the point where he was becoming a little irritated and defensive. Was he really so bad at the games in the manual that she didn’t want to play along? He was using those super high quality fruits and fish meat too.
The crane spun around him, wings wide, providing just a hint of pressure downward to let her ungainly feet move quickly over the sand. The flashing red face at the end of the long, white neck reminded him of the red tassel that hung just below the spearhead on Liren’s spear.
“Oh DAMN IT ALL!” He stomped furiously, not stopping his dodging.
“Is there a problem, Daoist Tian?” Oily inquired, malice seeping through the paper thin politeness of his tone.
“Yes, I finally figured out why I was partnered with this specific crane.”
“Oh? And why is that?”
“Because we have similar temperaments.”
“Is that so?”
Tian didn’t elaborate. Of course the crane played the games for the food. The food was delicious. Of course it didn’t bond much with him while they were doing it. It was too simple. Too peaceful. One of Tian’s very favorite things in the whole world was sparring with his senior brothers. It seemed that the crane followed the implicit teachings of the West Town Outer Court. Eat Well, Trust Your Brothers, and Never Duck a Fight You Can Win.
They really were well suited.
“It could have been a gentle crane. A spirit of wild freedom moving in harmony with the world. Perhaps it wishes to become human to better understand laughter, or the joys of art.”
Did you really think that was possible? Did you really?
Tian sighed. When the bolts of energy started twisting like snakes and slashing like sabers, he could feel the crane’s simple happiness. Tian glanced up at the brilliant blue sky. The color seemed a little different up here, so high in the mountains. He should leave the bird to her fun and find a quiet rock to sit on. He could teach himself how to play a bamboo flute with seven fingers. He would get by swapping tea for food and more tea. A quiet life. Yes, a quiet, peaceful life.
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The crane started calling at him and aggressively flapping her wing to hurry him along.
“You sound like a gate with a squeaky hinge. I know you don’t know what that is, but that is exactly what you sound like right now.” Tian grumbled for a moment, then gave in. “Level Thirteen, please. Let’s see if we can’t take this all the way to the top.”
Level Thirteen and Fourteen slowed him down for almost an hour- the beams of energy had started varying their attack speed and tempo dramatically, along with all the changes in direction. The oily daoist wasn’t hiding his manipulation of the array any more. He couldn’t. Rivulets of sweat ran down his pale face as his fingers danced over his compass. Tian couldn’t imagine why. He was feeling nicely warmed up after the light workout.
He stifled a giggle. Imagine trying to cultivate immortality without refining your body. Imagine trying to cultivate immortality just relying on your ability to make arrays. What a bad joke.
“Let's give Level Fifteen a try, shall we? I’m curious to see what the peak of the Earthly Realm looks like.”
Oily didn’t have any cutting jabs this time. Tian was pretty sure he heard the daoist stifle a groan as he made the adjustments.
Level Fifteen was… exciting. Tian didn’t know how people from the Five Elements Courtyard managed it. He was quickly pushed to the limits of his concentration. Five beams of energy came in like twisting weeds or branching lightning, or up like sprouting bamboo. Some faster, some slower, always moving, always on the attack. His body could keep up, but trying to alert the crane to the movement of the energy, strategizing with her on how to block the beams or destroy them while he was tracking and dodging, left him gasping.
“There has to be a better way. There just has to be.” Tian put his back to the crane and they spun around, feeling each other move. Tian was leading, but he had to follow the crane’s movements too. He couldn’t force her to move like he did. He couldn’t force her to move at all. He could only lead, and trust that she saw a good reason to follow.
“The most dangerous words in any language are ‘Follow me.’ Some people will tell you it’s ‘Trust me’ or ‘I love you,’ but that’s just picking different ways of saying the same thing. Everyone can choose what to do with their life. Fate, destiny, Heaven’s will, sure. But you can choose, and so can everyone else. ‘I know better than you. Your life will be better if you do what I say.’ It takes a degree of arrogance to say something like that.” Tian could remember Brother Wong’s pointy smile as Tian painstakingly picked off the mildly poisonous spines from a Purple Spring Thornberry Thistle.
“They might be right. Or they might be trying to abuse your trust. Or they might simply be incapable and unworthy. Not everyone is capable of leading people. Few are, in fact, and fewer still should. Be very careful when someone tells you to follow them. Be even more careful when you tell someone to follow you. It’s a dreadful responsibility you are taking on. It’s life and death, or worse.”
Another memory intruded, this time it was Elder Rui, sitting in the meeting hall, explaining the journey they were about to set out on.
“The road to longevity has never been one everyone can walk. The Dao has always been transmitted from Master to Disciple, or through books whose esoteric meanings are understood only by the fated and the wise. It is that transmission of wisdom and experience that is the faith and foundation of orthodox cultivation. It is one reason we revere filial piety and persistently cleave to tradition. Generation after generation have seen for themselves that the ancestors' teachings are true.”
It was a fostering. He wasn’t commanding the crane, he was showing her the way to wisdom. It was the filial virtue a parent should show a child. The way Brother Fu taught him. With patience, and love. With boundaries and freedom in balance. With the courage to say “Follow me, because I am worth following.”
If the crane chose to awaken her wisdom, then they would be friends and comrades. For now, he would take the role of foster father, accept responsibility, and lead.
Tian and the crane sped up. Their movements smoothed out, the timing got sharper, their bodies were less stressed. Everything started flowing once Tian stopped trying to force the crane to follow his instructions. He led, and she was willing to follow. For now. So long as he kept making the right choices.
They danced around the practice field for five more minutes, then the crane hopped up on Tian’s shoulder and launched herself into the air as Tian dropped flat. One bolt of energy hit another, hit another, hit another- the cycle accelerating and growing… then collapsing. The system of elemental generation and restraint was a closed loop, and Tian had made sure the last struck bolt had nothing left to work on. With a burst of golden light, and the crackle of fireworks, the energy blew apart.
Tian dusted himself off for a moment, then rolled his shoulders and spread his arms wide. It felt so good!
The crane landed, perching with one big foot on each shoulder. Then she spread her wings wide too, glaring down on the two from the Five Elements Courtyard. He could feel the smugness radiating off of her.
“What? No, absolutely not. Off with you. You aren’t a parrot. You aren’t even a crow, or a raven or something. You are too damn big to be perched on my shoulders. Shoo. Shoo.” Tian tried to push the bird away, but she dug her claws in a bit and he didn’t achieve much. She was Level Nine. If she wanted to hang on to his shoulder, she would. She kept her wings out straight, displaying her dominance to their cowed hosts.
“Congratulations, Daoist Tian. It seems that you and your bird both cleared the Earthly Realm levels of our Nine Poles Eight Directions Field in a single day. A new record.” The heavy daoist didn’t sound that congratulatory. Tian felt the fake courtesy didn’t suit him. In retaliation, he dubbed the two the Fried Dough Daoists.
“Yes, thank you. It has been very enlightening.” Tian smiled warmly. “Perhaps one of you can demonstrate an easier way to do it? I must have made quite a laughable performance.”
“Ah, well perhaps another time.” Oily was failing to conceal his heaving chest or his sweat-soaked collar. Doughy wasn’t looking eager either.
“No time like the present! Fellow Daoists have had the advantage of watching your seniors perform, and of course, your own experiences clearing the array. I bet you can clear it just like that.” Tian’s fingers snapped, whip-crack sharp. His smile was warm and entirely genuine. “Please. I can’t wait to watch and learn.”
- Chapter 20- A Question of Will
- Chapter 19- A Quiet Word With A Heretic
- Chapter 18- Beating With Sticks, Slapping With Hands, Part 1
- Chapter 17- Are We Fighting Wrong?
- Chapter 16- Biting Serpent and Heavy Stick
- Chapter 15- Fort Askarmand
- Chapter 14- Green Grass or Red Sand?
- Chapter 13- The Intermediation of an Eagle
- Chapter 12- An Inadequate Weed
- Chapter 11- Into the Sea of Grass
- Chapter 10- Storm on the Grassland
- Chapter 9- The Children of the Endless Blue Sky
- Chapter 8- Mourning and Evening
- Chapter 7- Unresigned Hou
- Chapter 6- Hell Wager
- Chapter 5- The Burden of Choice
- Chapter 4- Putting Together Broken Clay to Make a Cup
- Chapter 3- Blazing City
- Chapter 2- Thunder from a Clear Blue Sky
- Sky Pride Vol. Chapter 7 Chapter 1- Completing a Rescue Starts With Burglary
- Epilogue III- Two Birds of a Feather
- Epilogue II- Talented Siblings on Parallel Paths
- Epilogue I- Filial Piety, Reconsidered
- Chapter 55- Banditry is Harder Than It Looks
- Chapter 54- Productive Hours
- Chapter 53- Descent of the Gods
- Chapter 52- A Strayed Goddess Plots Murder
- Chapter 51- Immortals Drunk on Moonlight
- Chapter 50- Common Clay
- Chapter 49- Promising Youth
- Chapter 48- An Immortal Tutor
- Chapter 47- The Importance of Proper Education
- Chapter 46- The Strength of the Steppes
- Chapter 45- The Procession of the King of Hell
- Chapter 44- The Consequences of Doing the Right Things
- Chapter 43- Descending on Burning Flag City Once More
- Chapter 42- The Calling of Blood
- Chapter 41- Leaving in a Rush, Arriving Like You Never Left
- Chapter 40- Medicine Saint Jun and the Street Sweeping Mendicants
- Chapter 39- The Limits of a Trainee Doctor
- Chapter 38- The Kindness of Strangers
- Chapter 37- The Trouble With New Tools
- Chapter 36- Burning Bright
- Chapter 35- Revisiting Grievances
- Chapter 34- Making "Friends"
- Chapter 33- Learning to Fly
- Chapter 32- Healing
- Chapter 31- Are We Heretics Now?
- Chapter 30- Finally Getting It
- Chapter 29- Mermaid Silk
- Chapter 28- Finding Leads, and Gathering Supplies
- Chapter 27- The Greasiness of the Merchant Class
- Chapter 26- Mountain Gate City
- Chapter 25- The Foxes’ Tails are Hard to Hide
- Chapter 24- Stepping out onto a broader stage
- Chapter 23- The Vast Darknorth Sea Art
- Chapter 22- A Fortune Gathering Toad. All Kinds of Fortune.
- Chapter 21- Friends in Damp Places
- Chapter 20- The Evolution of Arts
- Chapter 19- Exploring a New Realm
- Chapter 18- The Education of Saints
- Chapter 17- Revelation of the Saints
- Chapter 16- The Human Vessel is Empty
- Chapter 15- The Music of Time Together
- Chapter 14- What Kind of Teachers Are These?
- Chapter 13- The Intersection of Diagnosis and Weeding
- Chapter 12- Growth, Broadly Defined
- Chapter 11- Sowing Fate
- Chapter 10- What Fortune Gathers
- Chapter 9- How Heavy a Dream
- My book is being pirated on Amazon (Update- Publishers are on it)
- Chapter 8- Sound and Color
- Chapter 7- Just a Stick with Some Holes and the Dao in it
- Chapter 6- Pretty Songbirds All in a Row
- Chapter 5- Qualifications of a Clenched Fist and an Open Palm
- Chapter 4- The Poison Called Doubt
- Chapter 3- Confident is a Strong Word
- Chapter 2- Every Test is One of Character
- Vol. Chapter 6 Chapter 1- Impatience
- Epilogue II- Soft Rice is the Tastiest
- Epilogue I- The King of Hell and his Book Carrying Servant
- Chapter 49- Word From On High
- Chapter 48- The Responsibilities of a Senior Brother
- Chapter 47- The Bindings of Past and Future
- Chapter 46- The Arrival of Consequences
- Chapter 45- Run or Fight or Both
- Chapter 44- A Heavenly Bird
- Chapter 43- The Princess Pierces the Sky
- Chapter 42- Expected Conclusions
- Chapter 41- Speaking Plainly
- Chapter 40- Sweet Reason
- Chapter 39- Placing the Toad in the Hole
- Chapter 38- The Many Flavors of Fortune
- Chapter 37- Bad Daoists Trying to be Better
- Chapter 36- Negotiations with a Tough Toad
- Chapter 35- Green Stone, Red Eyes
- Chapter 34- Many Ways to Show You Care
- Chapter 33- We Are What We Say We Are
- Chapter 32- Necessary Words
- Chapter 31- Blazing Heart Saint, Tempered Sunforged Phisique
- Chapter 30- Joining Hands Against The Heavens
- Chapter 29- Foundations Fit for a Heaven-Piercing Pagoda
- Chapter 28- A Yang Man
- Chapter 27- Close Enough to Taste, Far Enough to Kill
- Chapter 26- Finding the True Metal Between Fire and Water
- Chapter 25- The Simian Complaint
- Chapter 24- The Door of Contradiction
- Chapter 23- A Yin Man
- Chapter 22- A Study of Yang and Families
- Chapter 21- Stone Forest
- Chapter 20- Fire and Water
- Chapter 19- Falling Towards The Valley
- Chapter 18- The Irascible Sister Lin
- Chapter 17- A New Way of Fighting
- Chapter 16- Gathering the Young Experts
- Chapter 15- Struggling Mountain Folk
- Chapter 14- Making Do With What You Have
- Chapter 13- Moon Crossing the Lake
- Chapter 12- Digesting Gains and Losses
- Chapter 11- Dragon and Tiger Contending
- Chapter 10- The Use of a Sect
- Chapter 9- Some Reward
- Chapter 8- Bitten By a Ghost
- Chapter 7- A Tea Failure
- Chapter 6- How to Climb a Magic Mountain
- Chapter 5- A Home That Trains Your Heart
- Chapter 4- Awkward Farewell
- Chapter 3- Proof of Growth
- Chapter 2- Real Boxing
- Sky Pride Vol. Chapter 5 Chapter 1- King of a Short Hill
- Vol. Chapter 4 Epilogue II
- Vol. Chapter 4 Epilogue I
- Chapter 51- The Daoists Return to Simplicity
- Chapter 50- Standing at the Peak, Seeing Only Despair
- Chapter 49- Clearing The Mountain Gate
- Chapter 48- Blowing on a Cooling Ember
- Chapter 47- Eating Rice Today
- Chapter 46- How Terrible a Dead Heart
- Chapter 45- Finding What Matters
- Chapter 44- Debating the Dao
- Chapter 43- Racing Home
- Chapter 42- Bleeding Fortune
- Chapter 41- Hearing the True Dao Preached in the Morning
- Chapter 40- Choosing Your Family
- Chapter 39- Making a Name for One’s Self
- For those who didn’t read the Author Note- On vacation until Dec. 8
- Chapter 38- The Advantages of Being Useless
- Chapter 37- Dragged into the Light
- Chapter 36- What Was Lost and What Was Found
- Chapter 35- What Would You Pay For Your Family?
- Chapter 34- The Ingratitude of a Junior
- Chapter 33- Fiery Sky Soup
- Chapter 32- Pain, Past, Present and Future
- Chapter 31- Who You Find When You Are Alone In The Dark
- Chapter 30- Holding to Hope Too Long
- Chapter 29- Hooked on Acacia Thorns
- Chapter 28- A Chance to Change Fate
- Chapter 27- Letters From Eight Directions
- Chapter 26- Ominous Isn’t Always a Bad Sign
- Chapter 25- Glorious Pillage
- Chapter 24- The Wrath of the Gardener
- Chapter 23- A Matter of Merit
- Chapter 22- Shrine of the Northwest General
- Chapter 21- The Burning Sky Cranes
- Chapter 20- Memory Etched in Bone
- Chapter 19- The Difficulty of Simple Things
- Chapter 18- The Qualifications of a Ghost
- Chapter 17- Necessary Rituals
- Chapter 16- Untrustworthy Fortune
- Chapter 15- A Dream To Break An Empire
- Chapter 14- The Winecellar of the Copper Roof Inn
- Chapter 13- Eating Steel
- Chapter 12- A Dinner Full of Struggle
- Chapter 11- The Copper Roof Inn
- Chapter 10- Plunging into the Broad Sky Kingdom
- Chapter 9- The Difficulties of a Golden Fish
- Chapter 8- Merits, Earned and Otherwise
- Chapter 7- Red Blood on Blue Cobble Streets
- Chapter 6- Cranes Descend on Bluestone City
- Chapter 5- The Noble Vanguard
- Chapter 4- Familiar Business
- Chapter 3- Bitter Water
- Chapter 2- Rushing Along The Agate
- Chapter 1- Young Cranes in Flight
- Vol Chapter 3. Epilogue
- Chapter 55- A Cup Full of Dao
- Chapter 54- The Blood Red Battlefield
- Chapter 53- The Teachings of War King Cho
- Chapter 52- Who Chooses To Stand Under A Collapsing Wall?
- Chapter 51- Hideous Things
- Chapter 50- What A Good Array Can Do
- Chapter 49- Survival is a Weapon All on it’s Own
- Chapter 48- Gearing Up and Sorting Out
- Chapter 47- The Art of Carrying Crushing Weight
- Chapter 46- Attacked With Cakes
- Chapter 45- Generous Hosts
- Chapter 44- One’s Own Time
- Chapter 43- A Few Friendly Wagers
- Chapter 42- Dinner, Abbreviated
- Chapter 41- Descending on the Courtyard
- I’m on vacation, and will return on the 15th
- Chapter 40- Blessings Coming Together
- Chapter 39- Moonlit Lessons
- Chapter 38- The Gaps In Your Mind
- Chapter 37- The Weight of an Ancient Name
- Chapter 36- Learning to Talk
- Chapter 35- Not Just Enemies Meet on a Narrow Path
- Chapter 34- Beware Seniors Bearing Gifts
- Chapter 33- Meeting Royalty
- Chapter 32- Messages From Above
- Chapter 31- Charting the Sky
- Chapter 30- Selling the Dao
- Chapter 29- Making Friends With Your Fists
- Chapter 28- A Quick Stop At A Volcano
- Chapter 27- Business Opportunities
- Chapter 26- The Tiger Appreciation Society
- Chapter 25- The Strength of a Doctor
- Chapter 24- Disgraceful Sparring
- Chapter 23- Young Master Tian
- Chapter 22- A Peaceful Life of Cultivation
- Chapter 21- The Bamboo Medicine Hut
- Chapter 20- Thoughts Like A Mountain Stream
- Chapter 19- Choking on Mortal Air
- Chapter 18- Finding Today’s Limit
- Chapter 17- A Rock Worth More Than A Kingdom
- Chapter 16- A Fairy With Bloody Knuckles
- Chapter 15- Gone But Not Forgotten
- Chapter 14- Trading Heads
- Chapter 13- A Local Snake
- Chapter 12- Flowing Water Becoming a Landslide
- Chapter 11- The Smokey Shadow of the Demon
- Chapter 10- Exploding Bad People
- Chapter 9- A Daoist in the Garrison
- Chapter 8- The Red Plume General
- Chapter 7- The Second Supreme Virtue
- Chapter 6- Making Human Noises, Spotting Immortal Traps
- Chapter 5- Making New Friends
- Chapter 4- Strangers With Familiar Faces
- Chapter 3- Broken Emissaries
- Chapter 2- First Under The Heavens
- Vol. Chapter 3 - Chapter 1- Unrivaled Since Ancient Times
- Chapter 55- A Father in Old Age
- Chapter 54- A Son’s Love
- Chapter 53- A Five Colored Road To Eternity
- Chapter 52- An Eternal Dao
- Chapter 51- A Five Dimensional Attack
- Chapter 50- Cutting to the Heart of Things
- Chapter 49- Needle Sharp
- Chapter 48- Unfortunate Strength
- Chapter 47- Blazing in the Dark
- Chapter 46- What It Means To Burn
- Chapter 45- Embracing Yang
- Chapter 44- Burning Heart, Frozen Guts
- Chapter 43- One Fifth of Everything
- Chapter 42- Northern Soldier
- Chapter 41- Dropped Straight Into It
- Since some people missied the note- I’m back on the 23’rd.
- Chapter 40- Six Turns
- Chapter 39- With Open Hands
- Chapter 38- The Nature of Instruction
- Chapter 37- The Gentle Art of Taking A Hit
- Chapter 36- Growing Inside and Out
- Chapter 35- The First of the Three Treasures
- Chapter 34- Just a Momentary Joy
- Chapter 33- The Expectations of an Attentive Senior
- Chapter 32- Wiggling A New Finger
- Chapter 31- What Is Cultivated Is the Self
- Chapter 30- Bloody Money, Painful Merits
- Chapter 29- Hero
- Chapter 28- A Gentleman Can Wait Ten Years for Vengeance
- Chapter 27- Manufacturing Quality Goods
- Chapter 26- Planted On The Back Line
- Chapter 25- A Straight Answer to a Simple Question
- Chapter 24- Long Range Acupuncture
- Chapter 23- Building an Arsenal
- Chapter 22- It’s A Web, Not a Chain
- Chapter 21- “Glorious” Victory
- Chapter 20- Each Unique Suffering Life
- Chapter 19- Burning Wild
- Chapter 18- Into The Wind
- Chapter 17- A Child Carrying Gold In The Market
- Chapter 16- What Every Adventure Needs
- Chapter 15- The Calculations of Heavenly People
- Chapter 14- Pest Control
- Chapter 13- Men Die for Gold
- Chapter 12- Birds Die For Food...
- Chapter 11- The Demon Called Money
- Just wanted to say thank you
- Chapter 10- Life and Death and Somewhere In Between
- Chapter 9- What Makes A Cultivator?
- Chapter 8- A Long Night Brings Many Dreams
- Chapter 7- A Medic In The Field
- Chapter 6- The Long Patrol
- Chapter 5- Refusing The Toast
- Chapter 4- Nothing Personal
- Chapter 3- The Line Between Necessary and Good
- Chapter 2- Purity is in the Mind of the Beholder
- Chapter 1- The Supreme Virtue Hell Suppressing Body Refining Sutra, and Losing a War
- Chapter 50- Raising Spears For A Long War
- Chapter 49- Heart Eating Hate
- Chapter 48- No Role But Victim
- Chapter 47- What Defines A Heretic
- Chapter 46- Waking Up
- Chapter 45- An Unpolished Jade
- Chapter 44- The Heart of Tea
- Chapter 43- Debating the Dao of Cruelty
- Chapter 42- Hell is What You Make of It
- Chapter 41- One Line Between Life and Death, Then and Now
- Chapter 40- Solitary Hunters of the Evil Path
- Chapter 39- An Opportunity to Excel
- Chapter 38- Enemies Meet on a Narrow Path
- Chapter 37- Meeting The Enemy
- Tax Evasion In The Fantasy World [April Fools Chapter]
- Chapter 36- First Combat Patrol
- Chapter 35- First Journey Through the Sky
- Chapter 34- A Boy Goes to War
- Chapter 33- Partially Grown Immortals
- Chapter 32- The Weight of the Word “Brother”
- Chapter 31- The Sound of an Oncoming Storm [Special Note At The End!]
- Chapter 30- The Lay Sisters Promise They Will Be Gentle
- Chapter 29- The Difference Between Heaven and Earth
- Chapter 28- Embracing the Wild Sky
- Chapter 27- Picking Poison
- Chapter 26- Moral Development
- Alright, this momentum is crazy. We gotta keep it going. More chaps coming this weekend
- Chapter 25- Brutal Methods of the Righteous
- Chapter 24- A Child Doing Wetwork
- Chapter 23- Mission Demon
- Chapter 22- Silently Taking a Life
- Chapter 21- “You Made Us Wait, Junior Brother!”
- Chapter 20- The Delicate Art of Enmity
- Chapter 19- A Rock Thrower Called Hong
- Chapter 18- The Dreadfulness of a Vine
- Chapter 17- A Tree to Fill The Sky
- Chapter 16- A Touch of Death
- Front page of Rising Stars in Six Days! So have evidence of my dark history...
- Chapter 15- At the Foot of an Endless Mountain
- Chapter 14- Dressing Human
- Chapter 13- Wolf Child Eyes The Sheep
- Chapter 12- Dustless Physique
- Chapter 11- Lotus Above, Snake Below
- Chapter 10- Ruthless Child
- Chapter 9- Lotuses Root in Tragedy
- Chapter 8- Pointing A Sword At Heaven
- Chapter 7- What’s Swimming?
- Chapter 6- Eating Treasure with Broken Teeth
- Chapter 5- Child of Destiny
- Chapter 4- First Steps on the Path
- Chapter 3- Junkyard Classroom, Trash Heap Hospital
- Chapter 2- Gourmet in the Garbage
- Chapter 1- In the Care of a Hateful God
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