Lilith: Origin of Succubi
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- Chapter 356
- Chapter 355
- Chapter 354
- Chapter 353
- Chapter 352
- Chapter 351
- Chapter 350
- Chapter 349
- Chapter 348
- Chapter 347
- Chapter 346
- Chapter 345
- Chapter 344
- Chapter 343
- Chapter 342
- Chapter 341
- Chapter 340
- Chapter 339
- Chapter 338
- Chapter 337
- Chapter 336
- Chapter 335
- Chapter 334
- Chapter 333
- Chapter 332
- Chapter 331
- Chapter 330
- Chapter 329
- Book 6 – Chapter 328
- Chapter 327
- Chapter 326
- Chapter 325
- Chapter 324
- Chapter 323
- Chapter 322
- Chapter 321
- Chapter 320
- Chapter 319
- Chapter 318
- Chapter 317
- Chapter 316
- Chapter 315
- Chapter 314
- Chapter 313
- Chapter 312
- Chapter 311
- Chapter 310
- Chapter 309
- Chapter 308
- Chapter 307
- Chapter 306
- Chapter 305
- Chapter 304
- Chapter 303
- Chapter 302
- Chapter 301
- Chapter 300
- Chapter 299
- Chapter 298
- Chapter 297
- Chapter 296
- Chapter 295
- Chapter 294
- Chapter 293
- Chapter 292
- Chapter 291
- Chapter 290
- Chapterr 289
- Chapter 288
- Chapter 287
- Chapter 286
- Chapter 285
- Chapter 284
- Chapter 283
- Chapter 282
- Chapter 281
- Chapter 280
- Chapter 279
- Chapter 278
- Chapter 277
- Chapter 276
- Chapter 275
- Chapter 274
- Chapter 273
- Chapter 272
- Chapter 271
- Chapter 270
- Chapter 269
- Chapter 268
- Chapter 267
- Chapter 266
- Chapter 265
- Chapter 264
- Chapter 263
- Chapter 262
- Chapter 261
- Chapter 260
- Chapter 259
- Chapter 258
- Chapter 257
- Chapter 256
- Chapter 255
- Chapter 254
- Chapter 253
- Chapter 252
- Chapter 251
- Chapter 250
- Book 5 – Chapter 249
- Chapter 248
- Chapter 247
- Chapter 246
- Chapter 245
- Chapter 244
- Chapter 243
- Chapter 242
- Chapter 241
- Chapter 240
- Chapter 239
- Chapter 238
- Chapter 237
- Chapter 236
- Chapter 235
- Chapter 234
- Chapter 233
- Chapter 232
- Chapter 231
- Chapter 230
- Chapter 229
- Chapter 228
- Chapter 227
- Chapter 226
- Chapter 225
- Chapter 224
- Chapter 223
- Chapter 222
- Chapter 221
- Chapter 220
- Chapter 219
- Chapter 218
- Chapter 217
- Chapter 216
- Chapter 215
- Chapter 214
- Chapter 213
- Chapter 212
- Chapter 211
- Chapter 210
- Chapter 209
- Chapter 208
- Chapter 207
- Chapter 206
- Chapter 205
- Chapter 204
- Chapter 203
- Chapter 202
- Chapter 201
- Chapter 200
- Chapter 199
- Chapter 198
- Chapter 197
- Chapter 196
- Chapter 195
- Chapter 194
- Chapter 193
- Chapter 192
- Chapter 191
- Chapter 190
- Chapter 189
- Chapter 188
- Chapter 187
- Chapter 186
- Chapter 185
- Chapter 184
- Chapter 183
- Chapter 182
- Chapter 181
- Chapter 180
- Chapter 179
- Chapter 178
- Chapter 177
- Chapter 176
- Chapter 175
- Chapter 174
- Chapter 173
- Chapter 172
- Chapter 171
- Chapter 170
- Chapter 169
- Chapter 168
- Chapter 167
- Chapter 166
- Chapter 165
- Chapter 164
- Chapter 163
- Chapter 162
- Chapter 161
- Chapter 160
- Chapter 159
- Chapter 158
- Chapter 157
- Chapter 156
- Chapter 155
- Chapter 154
- Chapter 153
- Chapter 152
- Chapter 151
- Chapter 150
- Chapter 149
- Chapter 148
- Chapter 147
- Chapter 146
- Chapter 145
- Chapter 144
- Chapter 143
- Chapter 142
- Chapter 141
- Chapter 140
- Chapter 139
- Chapter 138
- Chapter 137
- Chapter 136
- Chapter 135
- Chapter 134
- Chapter 133
- Chapter 132
- Chapter 131
- Chapter 130
- Chapter 129
- Chapter 128
- Chapter 127
- Chapter 126
- Chapter 125
- Chapter 124
- Chapter 123
- Chapter 122
- Chapter 121
- Chapter 120
- Chapter 119
- Chapter 118
- Chapter 117
- Chapter 116
- Chapter 115
- Chapter 114
- Chapter 113
- Chapter 112
- Chapter 111
- Chapter 110
- Chapter 109
- Chapter 108
- Chapter 107
- Chapter 106
- Chapter 105
- Chapter 104
- Chapter 103
- Chapter 102
- Chapter 101
- Chapter 100
- Chapter 99
- Chapter 98
- Chapter 97
- Chapter 96
- Chapter 95
- Chapter 94
- Chapter 93
- Chapter 92
- Chapter 91
- Chapter 90
- Chapter 89
- Chapter 88
- Chapter 87
- Chapter 86
- Chapter 85
- Chapter 84
- Chapter 83
- Chapter 82
- Chapter 81
- Chapter 80
- Chapter 79
- Chapter 78
- Chapter 77
- Chapter 76
- Chapter 75
- Chapter 74
- Chapter 73
- Chapter 72
- Chapter 71
- Chapter 70
- Chapter 69
- Chapter 68
- Chapter 67
- Chapter 66
- Chapter 65
- Chapter 64
- Chapter 63
- Chapter 62
- Chapter 61
- Chapter 60
- Chapter 59
- Chapter 58
- Chapter 57
- Chapter 56
- Chapter 55
- Chapter 54
- Chapter 53
- Chapter 52
- Chapter 51
- Chapter 50
- Chapter 49
- Chapter 48
- Chapter 47
- Chapter 46
- Chapter 45
- Chapter 44
- Chapter 43
- Chapter 42
- Chapter 41
- Chapter 40
- Chapter 39
- Chapter 38
- Chapter 37
- Chapter 36
- Chapter 35
- Chapter 34
- Chapter 33
- Chapter 32
- Chapter 31
- Chapter 30
- Chapter 29
- Chapter 28
- Chapter 27
- Chapter 26
- Chapter 25
- Chapter 24
- Chapter 23
- Chapter 22
- Chapter 21
- Chapter 20
- Chapter 19
- Chapter 18
- Chapter 17
- Chapter 16
- Chapter 15
- Chapter 14
- Chapter 13
- Chapter 12
- Chapter 11
- Chapter 10
- Chapter 9
- Chapter 8
- Chapter 7
- Chapter 6
- Chapter 5
- Chapter 4
- Chapter 3
- Chapter 2
- Chapter 1
The sun was already down by the time my friends and I finally got out of that long meeting. Even though Cecilia didn't live with us, all of us lived in the same direction. Since we had been spending a lot of time with Tenna and her family right before system's end, we ended up buying a couple of properties nearby with the money we had been saving once it was clear that we probably wouldn't leave town anytime soon. It wasn't the best part of the city, but that actually made things easier for Eira when they started working on opening up a brothel. Cecilia had enough money of her own to buy a cheap property, and it wasn't long after that Fellia and Maddy started staying with her. All of us settled in the city pretty quickly, all things considered.
"So, how are you going to tell Bella about her mother?" Morrigan asked.
I sighed. "Does it have to be me who tells her? You were there too, you know."
Morrigan snickered and linked arms with me. "Of course you are going to tell her. You always did the talking when it came to her mother. And the two of you were together first. It would feel weird if I'm the one who tells her."
Torien patted me on the back. "Don't try to argue this one, you're not gonna win."
"It sounds like you two are ganging up on me." I dramatically crossed my arms and huffed to everyone's amusement. I glanced at Mimi, who smiled back, and then I suddenly remembered the project she completed for me. "Oh! Hey, check out the pocket watch Mimi made for me! She finally finished it up!"
I slipped the pocket watch out and flicked its front plate open. Morrigan leaned in and took a look at it. "It looks well-made. These numbers around the outside are the ones from your home?"
"Yep! And look, these numbers here are the bells," I said, pointing out the little ticks by the matching hours. The days are slightly longer than in my original world, but each bell was roughly an hour, so I had the pocket watch divided up into twelve units like I was used to, but each second was a bit longer than it had been in my old world. It worked out well, even if the seconds dragged on longer than I was used to, but it would be easier to plan things out with a more reliable measurement of time.
"Can I see it?" Torien asked.
I nodded and handed the pocket watch over. She played with the hinge a few times before examining the dial. "Twelve bells, huh? I never considered that there would be twelve bells throughout the day if you rang them through the night. This pocket watch seems useful. Maybe the scouts would appreciate something like this. It would make it easier to coordinate."
Mimi bounced up to Torien. "Now that I've finished Lilith's, I could make more! I don't know how much I should charge any scouts, but I'd be happy to make all of you one!" She glanced around at all of my friends. "Provided you at least paid for materials. I am supposed to be running the shop as my job."
Torien smiled and handed the pocket watch back to me before pulling Mimi into a side hug. "I'd like one for sure, then."
Morrigan bumped her hip against mine. "Don't think you distracted me from my question. What are you going to say to Bella?"
I sighed and scratched the base of my horn. "What's there to really say? I'll just tell her what happened. After the meeting we had, Corrine be in the city soon."
"Telling a former priest of the Tamin church about the succubi will be an interesting conversation, to say the least," Lori said, jumping into the conversation.
"You should tell Corrine about the succubi before you let Bella talk with her," Morrigan added.
I pulled her closer and kissed the top of her head. "That's the plan. Bella can't transform back, so Corrine needs to know about it before she sees her."
"Lilith!"
I turned my head to see an energetic cheetah girl running over. Luckily, she didn't crash into me with a tackle hug like she had earlier today. Oh shit, I forgot to go get her. I smiled awkwardly. "Sorry I didn't pick you up. A lot happened today, and the meeting ran long."
Eira tilted her head. "You've been in the same meeting since this afternoon all day?"
I laughed. "No, the second meeting was an emergency one that came up. I'll tell you about it... but not here. Come along with us, we're all headed home now."
Eira licked her lips as she looked over at Cecilia, Kal'daeryn, and Nelly. "Are these three joining us tonight too?"
Cecilia laughed. "Not tonight, you horny girl. I'm more than ready to get back to Fellia tonight. She and Maddy must have already eaten by now, so I don't want to be out too much longer."
The cheetah-succubus blew a raspberry. "You're no fun. You should invite her too! I'm sure one of the girls at the brothel can look after little Maddy for the night!"
"While I'm sure Fellia would love that," she said with a wink toward me, "I'm afraid that isn't something I should spring on them without warning. Maybe next time, Eira. I'll see you guys tomorrow morning." Cecilia turned at the next corner and headed toward her house alone.
"Kal'daeryn and I have been planning something tonight, so we'll have to join you another time as well. Sorry," Nelly said.
Eira shrugged with a smile on her face. "More for me then!"
"You invited Eira over tonight?" Morrigan asked.
I nodded. "After our spar this morning, we talked about relaxing together tonight. That was before all the business today, though. I'm a bit wiped out."
"If you guys are too tired, I can come another time... I don't want to get in the way if all of you are too exhausted," Eira said with clear disappointment on her face.
Torien snorted. "No way. The more tired we are, the more we're going to beg you to come over. Bella has been insatiable lately. It takes all of us to keep her satisfied now. It's only gotten worse since she got stuck in her succubus form."
I cleared my throat. "I'm sure she'd be happy to see you... but if you come over tonight, you're going to have to sit through what might end up being a bit of a difficult conversation."
Eira raised an eyebrow. "Whatever is happening involves Bella? I wouldn't have expected that."
Morrigan sighed. "More than you know, unfortunately."
"What are you going to do, Lori?" Torien asked.
She shrugged. "I could join you all tonight. It feels a bit lonely by myself in my room while the rest of you have orgies all the time."
Torien blushed and looked away. "It still feels weird when you join. I feel like a pervert anytime I see you naked."
"I don't know how that sense of modesty survived your training," Lori said with a bittersweet chuckle. "How did you get over your hang-ups with your sister?"
Torien's blush deepened, and she began staring at the ground. "I'm used to seeing her naked, and we never do stuff together ourselves. I just watch sometimes... It would be different with you..."
"So your voyeuristic tendencies only extend to one of your sisters, not your other triplet?" Lori teased.
"It's different!" Torien repeated.
I sighed. "Lori, stop messing with her. She's still pretty awkward about the whole thing. It's taken a lot for her to warm up to even doing stuff in the same room."
"I'd totally fuck my twin sister if I had one," Eira said without a hint of shame. "She'd be hot!"
Torien put her head in her hands and just groaned.
"Aww, let me have my fun. I almost never get to tease my 'sisters,' not much fazes Tori anymore," Lori replied.
"Here we are," I said, interrupting.
We had moved into a two-story house and had it increased to three stories later. It was made of much of the same stone walls that most of the town was made from, but it had been painted a cheery light blue color at Bella's request. Shortly after Morrigan and I joined the council, Tornick insisted he come by to reinforce things, add a floor, raise all the ceilings for our true forms, and rearrange the walls for us. We ended up making the entire top floor into a large bedroom that can accommodate all of my lovers at once, with room to spare for any additional people who want to join. The space that wasn't taken up by our huge bed was turned into closets for everyone to store their personal effects, but none of them had much stuff yet. The poor triplets didn't even have any spare clothes past what was stored in the small trunks Mimi had been carrying for them.
The second floor had been turned into guest rooms and workspaces for everyone. Not all of the rooms on that floor were used, so it was a bit quiet. Lori was living with us even though she wasn't part of our relationship, but she didn't want to be far from her two nieces after finally reconnecting with them. Raya and Sibyl were staying with us too, but they often slept in our bed despite not strictly being a part of our relationship. Silva was staying with us until recently, but she left to meet up with Sophin and hasn't returned from that trip. It's been about a month now, but we weren't worried yet. By now, the two should have already met up with each other, but we haven't received any letters from her either. Things were still a bit awkward between her and Torien, but they seemed to at least be friends now. Silva hadn't officially gotten back together with Lori, but the two slept with each other decently often. It seemed to be more of a casual thing between the two of them rather than an actual relationship. I haven't really asked for details, and neither of them has chosen to volunteer anything to me either. It's probably better for me to stay out of it for now.
The ground floor was divided into a large kitchen, a dining room with a large round table, and a cozy living area with a few couches and coffee tables. Strictly speaking, none of us needed to eat, but we often did anyway. Food was a nice way to enjoy ourselves and spend time socializing, though it was a lot easier for us to skip meals if something came up. Without any of the modern luxuries I was used to, the living room was mainly for relaxing with tea and entertaining guests. The dining area was mostly used for meetings, but we did eat there when we chose to have a 'family dinner'. Now that I know more about the food issues in town, I was a bit more reluctant to eat as much since we didn't really need to, but from the way it was explained to me, a lot of the food we had would go bad eventually. Only so much of it was preservable in the first place.
I felt a rush of excitement and quickly fading boredom from Bella as soon as the bond connected. For the last month or so, she stopped working at the nearby clinic as a healer since her pregnancy had progressed so much. Her growing belly made standing for too long and helping patients too much of a challenge, so she had finally given up and retreated to the house when she found out she couldn't shift back to her normal beastkin form anymore. She spent most of her free time studying anatomical texts and trying to improve her knowledge about healing or painting as a break from them. The texts weren't perfect, but they were helping improve her efficiency here and there. They were interesting to her, but you can only study dry healing texts for so long before you get tired of them.
Bella opened the door and smiled down at us. Her true form was just a bit under eight feet tall, so for now she towered over us. Her long tail swung back and forth behind her, and her body was wrapped in a thin robe that didn't leave her curves to the imagination. Below her slightly swollen breasts was a giant baby bump that stuck out significantly from her torso. I was sure our kids were going to be huge, because it really didn't look like we would be giving birth to a normal-sized beastkin child. We didn't know what a baby succubus would be like, but from the look of it, we would be finding out pretty soon.
A hint of lust spilled out through the bond when she locked eyes with Eira, and the shameless cheetah-succubus waggled her eyebrows at my sexy deer. Bella turned to me and showed me a toothy grin with her two large fangs peeking out of her mouth. "You brought a guest tonight. I was wondering where all of you have been. It looks like work kept all of you much longer than usual."
"Bella!" Mimi rushed over and melted into Bella's arms before turning to gently rub her belly. Mimi had been fascinated by all of Bella's changes and had become extra affectionate and loving since Bella had started showing. Mimics didn't reproduce like animals do, so she was far more interested in this than might be typical. We weren't sure whether Mimi could become pregnant or not, since she was a succubus now, but it was nice to see how caring and nurturing she could be. Maybe I would be persuaded to try in a few years, depending on how having children with Bella went. I was already a little frightened by the prospect of all the ones I had promised to have with Bella.
All of us followed the giant deer girl inside and began stripping out of our clothes. Tori, Mori, and I all shifted into our true succubi forms and wrapped our arms around Bella and Mimi. The freedom to change into our true forms whenever we wanted to felt so liberating, and the twins were still getting used to them, so they tried to stay in these forms anytime we were home. Eira took the cue to shift into her larger true form as well, and once Nelly and Kal'daeryn had excused themselves, Lori was left being the only one joining us that was unable to shift yet. It was unclear why, but the twins had outpaced her somehow. Either way, the big group hug after such a long day felt nice, but I knew I couldn't push this off any longer. It was time to settle in the living room and tell Bella about her mother.
"Bella... we need to talk about something important," I told her.
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- Chapter 248
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- Chapter 151
- Chapter 150
- Chapter 149
- Chapter 148
- Chapter 147
- Chapter 146
- Chapter 145
- Chapter 144
- Chapter 143
- Chapter 142
- Chapter 141
- Chapter 140
- Chapter 139
- Chapter 138
- Chapter 137
- Chapter 136
- Chapter 135
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- Chapter 128
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- Chapter 77
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- Chapter 72
- Chapter 71
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- Chapter 65
- Chapter 64
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- Chapter 62
- Chapter 61
- Chapter 60
- Chapter 59
- Chapter 58
- Chapter 57
- Chapter 56
- Chapter 55
- Chapter 54
- Chapter 53
- Chapter 52
- Chapter 51
- Chapter 50
- Chapter 49
- Chapter 48
- Chapter 47
- Chapter 46
- Chapter 45
- Chapter 44
- Chapter 43
- Chapter 42
- Chapter 41
- Chapter 40
- Chapter 39
- Chapter 38
- Chapter 37
- Chapter 36
- Chapter 35
- Chapter 34
- Chapter 33
- Chapter 32
- Chapter 31
- Chapter 30
- Chapter 29
- Chapter 28
- Chapter 27
- Chapter 26
- Chapter 25
- Chapter 24
- Chapter 23
- Chapter 22
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- Chapter 19
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- Chapter 17
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