Cultivation System: Elder Edition
Chapter 351 - Changes (VIII)
- Chapter 401 - A Glimpse (I)
- Chapter 400 - Grudges (VII)
- Chapter 399 - Grudge (VI)
- Chapter 398 - A Vow (XI)
- Chapter 397 - A Vow (X)
- Chapter 396 - A Vow (IX)
- Chapter 395 - A Vow (VIII)
- Chapter 394 - A Vow (VII)
- Chapter 393 - A Vow (VI)
- Chapter 392 - A Vow (V)
- Chapter 391 - A Vow (IV)
- Chapter 390 - A Vow (III)
- Chapter 389 - A Vow (II)
- Chapter 388 - A Vow (I)
- Chapter 387 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXXIV)
- Chapter 386 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXXII)
- Chapter 385 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXXI)
- Chapter 384 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXX)
- Chapter 383 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXIX)
- Chapter 382 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXVIII)
- Chapter 381 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXVII)
- Chapter 380 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXVI)
- Chapter 379 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXV)
- Chapter 378 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXIV)
- Chapter 377 - Ghosts of the Mine (XVIII)
- Chapter 376 - Ghosts of the Mine (XVII)
- Chapter 375 - Ghosts of the Mine (XVI)
- Chapter 374 - Ghosts of the Mine (XV)
- Chapter 373 - Ghosts of the Mine (XIV)
- Chapter 372 - Ghosts of the Mine (XVIII)
- Chapter 371 - Ghosts of the Mine (XVII)
- Chapter 370 - Ghosts of the Mine (XVI)
- Chapter 369 - Ghosts of the Mine (XV)
- Chapter 368 - Ghosts of the Mine (XIV)
- Chapter 367 - Ghosts of the Mine (XIII)
- Chapter 366 - Ghosts of the Mine (XII)
- Chapter 365 - Ghosts of the Mine (XI)
- Chapter 364 - Ghosts of the Mine (X)
- Chapter 363 - Ghosts of the Mine (IX)
- Chapter 362 - Ghosts of the Mine (VIII)
- Chapter 361 - Ghosts of the Mine (VII)
- Chapter 360 - Ghosts of the Mine (VI)
- Chapter 359 - Ghosts of the Mine (V)
- Chapter 358 - Ghosts of the Mine (IV)
- Chapter 357 - Ghosts of the Mine (III)
- Chapter 356 - Ghosts of the Mine (II)
- Chapter 355 - Ghosts of the Mine (I)
- Chapter 354 - Changes (XI)
- Chapter 353 - Changes (X)
- Chapter 352 - Changes (IX)
- Chapter 351 - Changes (VIII)
- Chapter 350 - Changes (VII)
- Chapter 349 - Changes (VI)
- Chapter 348 - Changes (V)
- Chapter 347 - Changes (IV)
- Chapter 346 - Changes (III)
- Chapter 345 - Changes (II)
- Chapter 344 - Changes (I)
- Chapter 343 - World Awakens (II)
- Chapter 342 - World Awakens (I)
- Chapter 341 - Truths and Lies (XXVII)
- Chapter 340 - Truths and Lies (XXVI)
- Chapter 339 - Truths and Lies (XXV)
- Chapter 338 - Truths and Lies (XXIV)
- Chapter 337 - Truths and Lies (XXIII)
- Chapter 336 - Truths and Lies (XXII)
- Chapter 335 - Truths and Lies (XXI)
- Chapter 334 - Truths and Lies (XX)
- Chapter 333 - Truths and Lies (XIX)
- Chapter 332 - Truths and Lies (XVIII)
- Chapter 331 - Truths and Lies (XVII)
- Chapter 330 - Truths and Lies (XVI)
- Chapter 329 - Truths and Lies (XV)
- Chapter 328 - Truths and Lies (XIV)
- Chapter 327 - Truths and Lies (XIII)
- Chapter 326 - Truths and Lies (XII)
- Chapter 325 - Truths and Lies (XI)
- Chapter 324 - Truths and Lies (X)
- Chapter 323 - Truths and Lies (IX)
- Chapter 322 - Truths and Lies (VIII)
- Chapter 321 - Truths and Lies (VII)
- Chapter 320 - Truths and Lies (VI)
- Chapter 319 - Truths and Lies (V)
- Chapter 318 - Truths and Lies (IV)
- Chapter 317 - Truths and Lies (III)
- Chapter 316 - Truths and Lies (II)
- Chapter 315 - Truths and Lies (I)
- Chapter 314 - Surging Spirit Art (V)
- Chapter 313 - Surging Spirit Art (IV)
- Chapter 312 - Surging Spirit Art (III)
- Chapter 311 - Surging Spirit Art (II)
- Chapter 310 - Surging Spirit Art (I)
- Chapter 309 - Secrets of the Lake (VI)
- Chapter 308 - Secrets of the Lake (V)
- Chapter 307 - Secrets of the Lake (IV)
- Chapter 306 - Secrets of the Lake (III)
- Chapter 305 - Secrets of the Lake (II)
- Chapter 304 - Secrets of the Lake (I)
- Chapter 303 - Silent Sage (VI)
- Chapter 302 - Silent Sage (V)
- Chapter 301 - Silent Sage (IV)
- Chapter 300 - Silent Sage (III)
- Chapter 299 - Silent Sage (II)
- Chapter 298 - Grudges (V)
- Chapter 297 - Grudges (IV)
- Chapter 296 - Silent Sage (I)
- Chapter 295 - Moonlake City (IX)
- Chapter 294 - Moonlake City (VIII)
- Chapter 293 - Moonlake City (VII)
- Chapter 292 - Moonlake City (VI)
- Chapter 291 - Moonlake City (V)
- Chapter 290 - Moonlake City (IV)
- Chapter 289 - Moonlake City (III)
- Chapter 288 - Moonlake City (II)
- Chapter 287 - Moonlake City (I)
- Chapter 286 - Moon Lake (XII)
- Chapter 285 - Moon Lake (XI)
- Chapter 284 - Moon Lake (X)
- Chapter 283 - Moon Lake (IX)
- Chapter 282 - Moon Lake (VIII)
- Chapter 281 - Moon Lake (VII)
- Chapter 280 - Moon Lake (VI)
- Chapter 279 - Moon Lake (V)
- Chapter 278 - Moon Lake (IV)
- Chapter 277 - Moon Lake (III)
- Chapter 276 - Moon Lake (II)
- Chapter 275 - Grudges (III)
- Chapter 274 - Moon Lake (I)
- Chapter 273 - Enduring Eternity (V)
- Chapter 272 - Enduring Eternity (IV)
- Chapter 271 - Enduring Eternity (III)
- Chapter 270 - Enduring Eternity (II)
- Chapter 269 - Enduring Eternity (I)
- Chapter 268 - Unforgiven (IX)
- Chapter 267 - Unforgiven (VIII)
- Chapter 266 - Unforgiven (VII)
- Chapter 265 - Unforgiven (VI)
- Chapter 264 - Unforgiven (V)
- Chapter 263 - Unforgiven (IV)
- Chapter 262 - Unforgiven (III)
- Chapter 261 - Unforgiven (II)
- Chapter 260 - Unforgiven (I)
- Chapter 259 - Darkness (X)
- Chapter 258 - Darkness (IX)
- Chapter 257 - Darkness (VIII)
- Chapter 256 - Darkness (VII)
- Chapter 255 - Darkness (VI)
- Chapter 254 - Darkness (V)
- Chapter 253 - Darkness (IV)
- Chapter 252 - Darkness (III)
- Chapter 251 - Darkness (II)
- Chapter 250 - Darkness (I)
- Chapter 249 - Legends and Myths (VII)
- Chapter 248 - Legends and Myths (VI)
- Chapter 247 - Legends and Myths (V)
- Chapter 246 - Legends and Myths (IV)
- Chapter 245 - Legends and Myths (III)
- Chapter 244 - Legends and Myths (II)
- Chapter 243 - Legends and Myths (I)
- Chapter 242 - Legend of the Masked Children (XII)
- Chapter 241 - Legend of the Masked Children (XI)
- Chapter 240 - Legend of the Masked Children (X)
- Chapter 239 - Legend of the Masked Children (IX)
- Chapter 238 - Legend of the Masked Children (VIII)
- Chapter 237 - Legend of the Masked Children (VII)
- Chapter 236 - Legend of the Masked Children (VI)
- Chapter 235 - Legend of the Masked Children (V)
- Chapter 234 - Legend of the Masked Children (IV)
- Chapter 233 - Legend of the Masked Children (III)
- Chapter 232 - Legend of the Masked Children (II)
- Chapter 231 - Legend of the Masked Children (I)
- Chapter 230 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (XII)
- Chapter 229 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (XI)
- Chapter 228 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (X)
- Chapter 227 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (IX)
- Chapter 226 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (VIII)
- Chapter 225 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (VII)
- Chapter 224 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (VI)
- Chapter 223 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (V)
- Chapter 222 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (IV)
- Chapter 221 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (III)
- Chapter 220 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (II)
- Chapter 219 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (I)
- Chapter 218 - Spirits Blossoming (VII)
- Chapter 217 - Spirits Blossoming (VI)
- Chapter 216 - Spirits Blossoming (V)
- Chapter 215 - Spirits Blossoming (IV)
- Chapter 214 - Spirits Blossoming (III)
- Chapter 213 - Spirits Blossoming (II)
- Chapter 212 - Spirits Blossoming (I)
- Chapter 211 - The Sight of Silver (V)
- Chapter 210 - The Sight of Silver (IV)
- Chapter 209 - The Sight of Silver (III)
- Chapter 208 - The Sight of Silver (II)
- Chapter 207 - Grudges (II)
- Chapter 206 - The Sight of Silver (I)
- Chapter 205 - Over the Summit (XI)
- Chapter 204 - Over the Summit (X)
- Chapter 203 - Over the Summit (IX)
- Chapter 202 - Over the Summit (VIII)
- Chapter 201 - Over the Summit (VII)
- Chapter 200 - Over the Summit (VI)
- Chapter 199 - Over the Summit (V)
- Chapter 198 - Over the Summit (IV)
- Chapter 197 - Over the Summit (III)
- Chapter 196 - Over the Summit (II)
- Chapter 195 - Over the Summit (I)
- Chapter 194 - Calls From Beyond (IV)
- Chapter 193 - Calls From Beyond (III)
- Chapter 192 - Calls From Beyond (II)
- Chapter 191 - Calls From Beyond (I)
- Chapter 190 - The Unspoken Hurt (VIII)
- Chapter 189 - The Unspoken Hurt (VII)
- Chapter 188 - The Unspoken Hurt (VI)
- Chapter 187 - The Unspoken Hurt (V)
- Chapter 186 - The Unspoken Hurt (IV)
- Chapter 185 - The Unspoken Hurt (III)
- Chapter 184 - The Unspoken Hurt (II)
- Chapter 183 - The Unspoken Hurt (I)
- Chapter 182 - Eternal Lament (VIII)
- Chapter 181 - Eternal Lament (VII)
- Chapter 180 - Eternal Lament (VI)
- Chapter 179 - Eternal Lament (V)
- Chapter 178 - Eternal Lament (IV)
- Chapter 177 - Eternal Lament (III)
- Chapter 176 - Eternal Lament (II)
- Chapter 175 - Eternal Lament (I)
- Chapter 174 - Single Severance (II)
- Chapter 173 - Single Severance (I)
- Chapter 172 - Ways of the Wild (IV)
- Chapter 171 - Ways of the Wild (III)
- Chapter 170 - Ways of the Wild (II)
- Chapter 169 - Ways of the Wild (I)
- Chapter 168 - Eternal Range (X)
- Chapter 167 - Eternal Range (IX)
- Chapter 166 - Eternal Range (VIII)
- Chapter 165 - Eternal Range (VII)
- Chapter 164 - Eternal Range (VI)
- Chapter 163 - Eternal Range (V)
- Chapter 162 - Eternal Range (IV)
- Chapter 161 - Eternal Range (III)
- Chapter 160 - Eternal Range (II)
- Chapter 159 - Eternal Range (I)
- Chapter 158 - Sages of the Abyss (II)
- Chapter 157 - Sages of the Abyss (I)
- Chapter 156 - Festival of Sins (VII)
- Chapter 155 - Grudges (I)
- Chapter 154 - Festival of Sins (VI)
- Chapter 153 - Festival of Sins (V)
- Chapter 152 - Festival of Sins (IV)
- Chapter 151 - Festival of Sins (III)
- Chapter 150 - Festival of Sins (II)
- Chapter 149 - Festival of Sins (I)
- Chapter 148 - Great Questions (III)
- Chapter 147 - Great Questions (II)
- Chapter 146 - Great Questions (I)
- Chapter 145 - Aegis of Infinity (III)
- Chapter 144 - Aegis of Infinity (II)
- Chapter 143 - Aegis of Infinity (I)
- Chapter 142 - Shock and Awe (II)
- Chapter 141 - Shock and Awe (I)
- Chapter 140 - Northward (II)
- Chapter 139 - Northward (I)
- Chapter 138 - Tensions (V)
- Chapter 137 - Tensions (IV)
- Chapter 136 - Tensions (III)
- Chapter 135 - Tensions (II)
- Chapter 134 - Tensions (I)
- Chapter 133 - Echoes (IX)
- Chapter 132 - Echoes (VIII)
- Chapter 131 - Echoes (VII)
- Chapter 130 - Echoes (VI)
- Chapter 129 - Echoes (V)
- Chapter 128 - Echoes (IV)
- Chapter 127 - Echoes (III)
- Chapter 126 - Echoes (II)
- Chapter 125 - Echoes (I)
- Chapter 124 - Choices in Life (VI)
- Chapter 123 - Choices in Life (V)
- Chapter 122 - Choices in Life (IV)
- Chapter 121 - Choices in Life (III)
- Chapter 120 - Choices in Life (II)
- Chapter 119 - Choices in Life (I)
- Chapter 118 - Silence (III)
- Chapter 117 - Silence (II)
- Chapter 116 - Silence (I)
- Chapter 115 - Fading Traces (VII)
- Chapter 114 - Fading Traces (VI)
- Chapter 113 - Fading Traces (V)
- Chapter 112 - Fading Traces (IV)
- Chapter 111 - Fading Traces (III)
- Chapter 110 - Fading Traces (II)
- Chapter 109 - Fading Traces (I)
- Chapter 108 - Spiritwood Grove (VI)
- Chapter 107 - Spiritwood Grove (V)
- Chapter 106 - Spiritwood Grove (IV)
- Chapter 105 - Spiritwood Grove (III)
- Chapter 104 - Spiritwood Grove (II)
- Chapter 103 - Spiritwood Grove (I)
- Chapter 102 - When the Heavens Weep (VII)
- Chapter 101 - When the Heavens Weep (VI)
- Chapter 100 - When the Heavens Weep (V)
- Chapter 99 - When the Heavens Weep (IV)
- Chapter 98 - When the Heavens Weep (III)
- Chapter 97 - When the Heavens Weep (II)
- Chapter 96 - When the Heavens Weep (I)
- Chapter 95 - Spirit Sage (II)
- Chapter 94 - Spirit Sage (I)
- Chapter 93 - Art of Survival (IV)
- Chapter 92 - Art of Survival (III)
- Chapter 91 - Art of Survival (II)
- Chapter 90 - Art of Survival (I)
- Chapter 89 - Virtues of a Master (IV)
- Chapter 88 - Virtues of a Master (III)
- Chapter 87 - Virtues of a Master (II)
- Chapter 86 - Virtues of a Master (I)
- Chapter 85 - The Eternal Veil (VII)
- Chapter 84 - The Eternal Veil (VI)
- Chapter 83 - The Eternal Veil (V)
- Chapter 82 - The Eternal Veil (IV)
- Chapter 81 - The Eternal Veil (III)
- Chapter 80 - The Eternal Veil (II)
- Chapter 79 - The Eternal Veil (I)
- Chapter 78 - Upon the World (III)
- Chapter 77 - Upon the World (II)
- Chapter 76 - Upon the World (I)
- Chapter 75 - Tiny Parts of the Whole (II)
- Chapter 74 - Tiny Parts of the Whole (I)
- Chapter 73 - The Tales Woven (III)
- Chapter 72 - The Tales Woven (II)
- Chapter 71 - The Tales Woven (I)
- Chapter 70 - Fragments of Lives Gone (II)
- Chapter 69 - Fragments of Lives Gone (I)
- Chapter 68 - Internal Rot (III)
- Chapter 67 - Internal Rot (II)
- Chapter 66 - Internal Rot (I)
- Chapter 65 - Long Tao’s Fun Adventure (II)
- Chapter 64 - A Boy’s Struggles (II)
- Chapter 63 - A Boy’s Struggles (I)
- Chapter 62 - Long Tao’s Fun Adventure (I)
- Chapter 61 - A Little Respite
- Chapter 60 - Songs of Prelude (III)
- Chapter 59 - Songs of Prelude (II)
- Chapter 58 - Songs of Prelude (I)
- Chapter 57 - Greedy Justice (III)
- Chapter 56 - Greedy Justice (II)
- Chapter 55 - Greedy Justice (I)
- Chapter 54 - Tethers of Neverwhere (II)
- Chapter 53 - Tethers of Neverwhere (I)
- Chapter 52 - Declaration of War (II)
- Chapter 51 - Declaration of War (I)
- Chapter 50 - Windfall (II)
- Chapter 49 - Windfall (I)
- Chapter 48 - Antechamber (IV)
- Chapter 47 - Antechamber (III)
- Chapter 46 - Antechamber (II)
- Chapter 45 - Antechamber (I)
- Chapter 44 - Hidden Monsters (III)
- Chapter 43 - Hidden Monsters (II)
- Chapter 42 - Hidden Monsters (I)
- Chapter 41 - Betting & Competing (VI)
- Chapter 40 - Betting & Competing (V)
- Chapter 39 - Betting & Competing (IV)
- Chapter 38 - Betting & Competing (III)
- Chapter 37 - Betting & Competing (II)
- Chapter 36 - Betting & Competing (I)
- Chapter 35 - Days Mundane (II)
- Chapter 34 - Days Mundane (I)
- Chapter 33 - Vast-Body Art (IV)
- Chapter 32 - Vast-Body Art (III)
- Chapter 31 - Vast-Body Art (II)
- Chapter 30 - Vast-Body Art (I)
- Chapter 29 - Struggles of the Poor (III)
- Chapter 28 - Struggles of the Poor (II)
- Chapter 27 - Struggles of the Poor (I)
- Chapter 26 - To Be a Master (V)
- Chapter 25 - To Be a Master (IV)
- Chapter 24 - To Be a Master (III)
- Chapter 23 - To Be a Disciple (II)
- Chapter 22 - To Be a Master (I)
- Chapter 21 - Vast-Body Dantian (IV)
- Chapter 20 - Vast-Body Dantian (III)
- Chapter 19 - Vast-Body Dantian (II)
- Chapter 18 - Vast-Body Dantian (I)
- Chapter 17 - Plans Manifest(?) (III)
- Chapter 16 - Plans Manifest(?) (II)
- Chapter 15 - Plans Manifest(?) (I)
- Chapter 14 - Beg and Ye Shall Receive (II)
- Chapter 13 - Beg and Ye Shall Receive (I)
- Chapter 12 - Tests & Trials (IV)
- Chapter 11 - Tests & Trials (III)
- Chapter 10 - Tests & Trials (II)
- Chapter 9 - Tests & Trials (I)
- Chapter 8 - Spirit Stone Augmentation (III)
- Chapter 7 - Spirit Stone Augmentation (II)
- Chapter 6 - Spirit Stone Augmentation (I)
- Chapter 5 - Heart-Stitching Art (V)
- Chapter 4 - Heart-Stitching Art (IV)
- Chapter 3 - Heart-Stitching Art (III)
- Chapter 2 - Heart-Stitching Art (II)
- Chapter 1 - Heart-Stitching Art (I)
Chapter 351
Changes (VIII)
My first focus was on the movement art that Dai Xiu asked for.
I've watched her fight quite a few times now (quite a few times), and I can kind of understand what she means when she says Shadows Steps aren't suitable for her. For me, the art was practically indispensable, even before it evolved. It's kind of like an 'Undo' button, where I can quickly reposition because I made a mistake (or two).
It also allows me to actually fight to some degree, as, even without too strong of an attack, I can 'teleport' into their blind spots and attack from there.
Dai Xiu, however, doesn't fight like that; she's far more adept at melee combat than me, with the ability to bob and weave between attacks with ease and almost animal-like instincts to dodge attacks she can't see entirely.
Shadow Steps, for her, might even be a weakness, as they do essentially kill off all momentum. Even if I'm moving at a great speed and executing an attack, I can't use the steps--not even in the evolved form--to teleport myself in the act of movement. The landing is static, as it sort of 'refreshes' the state.
As such, for Dai Xiu, who is a quintessential example of a momentum-based fighter, Shadow Steps as a movement art really wasn't suitable.
... which begged the question, what precisely would be suitable?
The first thing my mind wandered off to was the boxers back on Earth and their 'movement techniques'. Though Dai Xiu didn't fight wholly like one, she's approximating a lot of the same philosophies. A lot of twitch, precise movements within a limited position to create just enough space to dodge and counterattack.
There was one big issue: I... have not a fucking clue how boxers moved. I've watched, what? Maybe three boxing matches in my entire life? And all of them before I even turned twenty. I never had any training in any kind of martial art, so me trying to use boxing principles to create a movement art would sort of be like asking a college student who just took an intro class to physics to build a nuclear bomb.
But maybe I can just imbue the general philosophy and hope that the system can make something of it?
Ugh, whatever. I have almost 13,000 points. If I can't splurge a bit now, then when can I?
I pulled up the creator's window and got to work.
Choosing Movement Art as a type, I paused a bit on the core structure; my instinct was in collision with my general understanding of Dai Xiu. That understanding was telling me to go for just two or three stances, but my instinct was telling me to go for 7 or 8. I'm not even sure why; maybe due to the sheer variance of possibilities when it comes to melee combat? I don't know, but I decided to trust it and see what comes of it.
With that, 55 points were already off the deck.
I opted for the 'Standard' logical connection as I wanted to save some points, though I also knew that this could be where the entire thing gets choked up.
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I could also save some points on Energy Type as I actually opted for it being purely physical. This would essentially make the art only useable by Dai Xiu, even if there'd be no outright restrictions. The reason was simple: it was her special constitution. Even when she's just moving and walking, she is using Qi as it's stored in every inch of her body. As such, she can supplement the lack of energy type through the fact that she naturally has Qi in her legs, something that nobody without either hers or a similar constitution could replicate.
I added a minor infusion of Wind and a minor infusion of Sound, totaling up to 110 points.
Finally arriving at the Specific Effects & Characteristics portion, I knew that this would likely be the bulk of the cost. There were a lot of options specifically for Movement Arts--dozens, in fact, with dozens more that were still grayed out--but I couldn't just add them willy-nilly.
Two, however, I added off the bat and without thinking too much--Burst Speed, which cost 30 points, and Agility/Flexibility Enhancement, which cost 20. 𝚏𝗿𝗲𝐞𝐰𝚎𝕓𝐧𝚘𝘃𝗲𝐥.𝐜𝚘𝕞
I scrolled a bit past the more extreme options, such as teleportation, short flight, and even stealth, and came upon a rather interesting one: Stop-and-Go. It cost a whopping 100 points, more than Short Flight, even, which cost 'just' 90.
And, as with most things in the system, its description was remarkably vague.
Lightly suspends the natural body resistances when stopping and moving instantaneously.
What the hell did that mean? I have no idea. I mean, I do have an idea--it likely just means that her ligaments won't be torn off when she accelerates and decelerates aggressively, but to what degree? No clue.
Regardless, I added it, totaling to 260 points.
After scrolling a bit more through the options, I frowned; there were a few more candidates, but all of them were simply too expensive. The cheapest one was 130 points, which would put me just shy of my maximum budget, but before committing to it, I wanted to see if I could add anything better somewhere down the line.
Pinning it to the back of my head, I moved down to Modifiers.
The one that I immediately added without a second thought was 'Reduced Learning Curve', which cost 50 points. I love Dai Xiu, and I think she's no less talented than any of the other kids, but I've gotten plenty of proof by now that her comprehension abilities are likely the worst out of everyone... and that includes me. She makes up for it by having probably the sharpest combat instincts out of everyone short of Long Tao, but... yeah. Any way I can lower the difficulty for her, I have to take it.
With that, I was up to 310 points, but there was nothing else in Modifiers that I wanted. Well, that's not true; I wanted a lot of things, but they all cost an insane amount of points. There was a particular concept that I think would suit her perfectly called 'Wind Perception'; she already seemed to have some innate connection to Wind, and with this concept, she'd be able to discern even the most minute movements through air currents within some radius around her.
The issue?
It cost a whopping 800 points. Plus, I don't think it would be particularly suitable for a movement art.
One day, when I redo her cultivation method to upgrade it to a higher tier, I'll probably have to add this to it.
My one bet to increasing the art's quality further is to find a way to shave off 40 points and add the characteristic I pinned in the back of my head--Perfect Stabilization. This one, at least, was far more direct than most, acknowledging that it did as its name indicated: regardless of her body's momentum and acceleration, she would be able to immediately stabilize her center of gravity. This, in combination with Stop-and-Go, would make for a mean combo in close-quarter fighting.
... and I found a perfect way to add it.
Under flaws, there's a particular one that I wouldn't add to any of the other kids, but it might be doable if it was Dai Xiu: Qi Consumption is increased by X amount. That X amount was a variable I could modify (up to 2x right now for a whopping 600 points), but I don't think even Dai Xiu would be able to sustain double consumption. I increased it just enough to shave off 40 points, which worked out to be about a 30% increase.
Alright.
I'm finally done.
... no, gotta name it first. And I have a perfect name for it in mind--
- Chapter 401 - A Glimpse (I)
- Chapter 400 - Grudges (VII)
- Chapter 399 - Grudge (VI)
- Chapter 398 - A Vow (XI)
- Chapter 397 - A Vow (X)
- Chapter 396 - A Vow (IX)
- Chapter 395 - A Vow (VIII)
- Chapter 394 - A Vow (VII)
- Chapter 393 - A Vow (VI)
- Chapter 392 - A Vow (V)
- Chapter 391 - A Vow (IV)
- Chapter 390 - A Vow (III)
- Chapter 389 - A Vow (II)
- Chapter 388 - A Vow (I)
- Chapter 387 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXXIV)
- Chapter 386 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXXII)
- Chapter 385 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXXI)
- Chapter 384 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXX)
- Chapter 383 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXIX)
- Chapter 382 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXVIII)
- Chapter 381 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXVII)
- Chapter 380 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXVI)
- Chapter 379 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXV)
- Chapter 378 - Ghosts of the Mine (XXIV)
- Chapter 377 - Ghosts of the Mine (XVIII)
- Chapter 376 - Ghosts of the Mine (XVII)
- Chapter 375 - Ghosts of the Mine (XVI)
- Chapter 374 - Ghosts of the Mine (XV)
- Chapter 373 - Ghosts of the Mine (XIV)
- Chapter 372 - Ghosts of the Mine (XVIII)
- Chapter 371 - Ghosts of the Mine (XVII)
- Chapter 370 - Ghosts of the Mine (XVI)
- Chapter 369 - Ghosts of the Mine (XV)
- Chapter 368 - Ghosts of the Mine (XIV)
- Chapter 367 - Ghosts of the Mine (XIII)
- Chapter 366 - Ghosts of the Mine (XII)
- Chapter 365 - Ghosts of the Mine (XI)
- Chapter 364 - Ghosts of the Mine (X)
- Chapter 363 - Ghosts of the Mine (IX)
- Chapter 362 - Ghosts of the Mine (VIII)
- Chapter 361 - Ghosts of the Mine (VII)
- Chapter 360 - Ghosts of the Mine (VI)
- Chapter 359 - Ghosts of the Mine (V)
- Chapter 358 - Ghosts of the Mine (IV)
- Chapter 357 - Ghosts of the Mine (III)
- Chapter 356 - Ghosts of the Mine (II)
- Chapter 355 - Ghosts of the Mine (I)
- Chapter 354 - Changes (XI)
- Chapter 353 - Changes (X)
- Chapter 352 - Changes (IX)
- Chapter 351 - Changes (VIII)
- Chapter 350 - Changes (VII)
- Chapter 349 - Changes (VI)
- Chapter 348 - Changes (V)
- Chapter 347 - Changes (IV)
- Chapter 346 - Changes (III)
- Chapter 345 - Changes (II)
- Chapter 344 - Changes (I)
- Chapter 343 - World Awakens (II)
- Chapter 342 - World Awakens (I)
- Chapter 341 - Truths and Lies (XXVII)
- Chapter 340 - Truths and Lies (XXVI)
- Chapter 339 - Truths and Lies (XXV)
- Chapter 338 - Truths and Lies (XXIV)
- Chapter 337 - Truths and Lies (XXIII)
- Chapter 336 - Truths and Lies (XXII)
- Chapter 335 - Truths and Lies (XXI)
- Chapter 334 - Truths and Lies (XX)
- Chapter 333 - Truths and Lies (XIX)
- Chapter 332 - Truths and Lies (XVIII)
- Chapter 331 - Truths and Lies (XVII)
- Chapter 330 - Truths and Lies (XVI)
- Chapter 329 - Truths and Lies (XV)
- Chapter 328 - Truths and Lies (XIV)
- Chapter 327 - Truths and Lies (XIII)
- Chapter 326 - Truths and Lies (XII)
- Chapter 325 - Truths and Lies (XI)
- Chapter 324 - Truths and Lies (X)
- Chapter 323 - Truths and Lies (IX)
- Chapter 322 - Truths and Lies (VIII)
- Chapter 321 - Truths and Lies (VII)
- Chapter 320 - Truths and Lies (VI)
- Chapter 319 - Truths and Lies (V)
- Chapter 318 - Truths and Lies (IV)
- Chapter 317 - Truths and Lies (III)
- Chapter 316 - Truths and Lies (II)
- Chapter 315 - Truths and Lies (I)
- Chapter 314 - Surging Spirit Art (V)
- Chapter 313 - Surging Spirit Art (IV)
- Chapter 312 - Surging Spirit Art (III)
- Chapter 311 - Surging Spirit Art (II)
- Chapter 310 - Surging Spirit Art (I)
- Chapter 309 - Secrets of the Lake (VI)
- Chapter 308 - Secrets of the Lake (V)
- Chapter 307 - Secrets of the Lake (IV)
- Chapter 306 - Secrets of the Lake (III)
- Chapter 305 - Secrets of the Lake (II)
- Chapter 304 - Secrets of the Lake (I)
- Chapter 303 - Silent Sage (VI)
- Chapter 302 - Silent Sage (V)
- Chapter 301 - Silent Sage (IV)
- Chapter 300 - Silent Sage (III)
- Chapter 299 - Silent Sage (II)
- Chapter 298 - Grudges (V)
- Chapter 297 - Grudges (IV)
- Chapter 296 - Silent Sage (I)
- Chapter 295 - Moonlake City (IX)
- Chapter 294 - Moonlake City (VIII)
- Chapter 293 - Moonlake City (VII)
- Chapter 292 - Moonlake City (VI)
- Chapter 291 - Moonlake City (V)
- Chapter 290 - Moonlake City (IV)
- Chapter 289 - Moonlake City (III)
- Chapter 288 - Moonlake City (II)
- Chapter 287 - Moonlake City (I)
- Chapter 286 - Moon Lake (XII)
- Chapter 285 - Moon Lake (XI)
- Chapter 284 - Moon Lake (X)
- Chapter 283 - Moon Lake (IX)
- Chapter 282 - Moon Lake (VIII)
- Chapter 281 - Moon Lake (VII)
- Chapter 280 - Moon Lake (VI)
- Chapter 279 - Moon Lake (V)
- Chapter 278 - Moon Lake (IV)
- Chapter 277 - Moon Lake (III)
- Chapter 276 - Moon Lake (II)
- Chapter 275 - Grudges (III)
- Chapter 274 - Moon Lake (I)
- Chapter 273 - Enduring Eternity (V)
- Chapter 272 - Enduring Eternity (IV)
- Chapter 271 - Enduring Eternity (III)
- Chapter 270 - Enduring Eternity (II)
- Chapter 269 - Enduring Eternity (I)
- Chapter 268 - Unforgiven (IX)
- Chapter 267 - Unforgiven (VIII)
- Chapter 266 - Unforgiven (VII)
- Chapter 265 - Unforgiven (VI)
- Chapter 264 - Unforgiven (V)
- Chapter 263 - Unforgiven (IV)
- Chapter 262 - Unforgiven (III)
- Chapter 261 - Unforgiven (II)
- Chapter 260 - Unforgiven (I)
- Chapter 259 - Darkness (X)
- Chapter 258 - Darkness (IX)
- Chapter 257 - Darkness (VIII)
- Chapter 256 - Darkness (VII)
- Chapter 255 - Darkness (VI)
- Chapter 254 - Darkness (V)
- Chapter 253 - Darkness (IV)
- Chapter 252 - Darkness (III)
- Chapter 251 - Darkness (II)
- Chapter 250 - Darkness (I)
- Chapter 249 - Legends and Myths (VII)
- Chapter 248 - Legends and Myths (VI)
- Chapter 247 - Legends and Myths (V)
- Chapter 246 - Legends and Myths (IV)
- Chapter 245 - Legends and Myths (III)
- Chapter 244 - Legends and Myths (II)
- Chapter 243 - Legends and Myths (I)
- Chapter 242 - Legend of the Masked Children (XII)
- Chapter 241 - Legend of the Masked Children (XI)
- Chapter 240 - Legend of the Masked Children (X)
- Chapter 239 - Legend of the Masked Children (IX)
- Chapter 238 - Legend of the Masked Children (VIII)
- Chapter 237 - Legend of the Masked Children (VII)
- Chapter 236 - Legend of the Masked Children (VI)
- Chapter 235 - Legend of the Masked Children (V)
- Chapter 234 - Legend of the Masked Children (IV)
- Chapter 233 - Legend of the Masked Children (III)
- Chapter 232 - Legend of the Masked Children (II)
- Chapter 231 - Legend of the Masked Children (I)
- Chapter 230 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (XII)
- Chapter 229 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (XI)
- Chapter 228 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (X)
- Chapter 227 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (IX)
- Chapter 226 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (VIII)
- Chapter 225 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (VII)
- Chapter 224 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (VI)
- Chapter 223 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (V)
- Chapter 222 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (IV)
- Chapter 221 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (III)
- Chapter 220 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (II)
- Chapter 219 - Legend of the Sage Alchemist (I)
- Chapter 218 - Spirits Blossoming (VII)
- Chapter 217 - Spirits Blossoming (VI)
- Chapter 216 - Spirits Blossoming (V)
- Chapter 215 - Spirits Blossoming (IV)
- Chapter 214 - Spirits Blossoming (III)
- Chapter 213 - Spirits Blossoming (II)
- Chapter 212 - Spirits Blossoming (I)
- Chapter 211 - The Sight of Silver (V)
- Chapter 210 - The Sight of Silver (IV)
- Chapter 209 - The Sight of Silver (III)
- Chapter 208 - The Sight of Silver (II)
- Chapter 207 - Grudges (II)
- Chapter 206 - The Sight of Silver (I)
- Chapter 205 - Over the Summit (XI)
- Chapter 204 - Over the Summit (X)
- Chapter 203 - Over the Summit (IX)
- Chapter 202 - Over the Summit (VIII)
- Chapter 201 - Over the Summit (VII)
- Chapter 200 - Over the Summit (VI)
- Chapter 199 - Over the Summit (V)
- Chapter 198 - Over the Summit (IV)
- Chapter 197 - Over the Summit (III)
- Chapter 196 - Over the Summit (II)
- Chapter 195 - Over the Summit (I)
- Chapter 194 - Calls From Beyond (IV)
- Chapter 193 - Calls From Beyond (III)
- Chapter 192 - Calls From Beyond (II)
- Chapter 191 - Calls From Beyond (I)
- Chapter 190 - The Unspoken Hurt (VIII)
- Chapter 189 - The Unspoken Hurt (VII)
- Chapter 188 - The Unspoken Hurt (VI)
- Chapter 187 - The Unspoken Hurt (V)
- Chapter 186 - The Unspoken Hurt (IV)
- Chapter 185 - The Unspoken Hurt (III)
- Chapter 184 - The Unspoken Hurt (II)
- Chapter 183 - The Unspoken Hurt (I)
- Chapter 182 - Eternal Lament (VIII)
- Chapter 181 - Eternal Lament (VII)
- Chapter 180 - Eternal Lament (VI)
- Chapter 179 - Eternal Lament (V)
- Chapter 178 - Eternal Lament (IV)
- Chapter 177 - Eternal Lament (III)
- Chapter 176 - Eternal Lament (II)
- Chapter 175 - Eternal Lament (I)
- Chapter 174 - Single Severance (II)
- Chapter 173 - Single Severance (I)
- Chapter 172 - Ways of the Wild (IV)
- Chapter 171 - Ways of the Wild (III)
- Chapter 170 - Ways of the Wild (II)
- Chapter 169 - Ways of the Wild (I)
- Chapter 168 - Eternal Range (X)
- Chapter 167 - Eternal Range (IX)
- Chapter 166 - Eternal Range (VIII)
- Chapter 165 - Eternal Range (VII)
- Chapter 164 - Eternal Range (VI)
- Chapter 163 - Eternal Range (V)
- Chapter 162 - Eternal Range (IV)
- Chapter 161 - Eternal Range (III)
- Chapter 160 - Eternal Range (II)
- Chapter 159 - Eternal Range (I)
- Chapter 158 - Sages of the Abyss (II)
- Chapter 157 - Sages of the Abyss (I)
- Chapter 156 - Festival of Sins (VII)
- Chapter 155 - Grudges (I)
- Chapter 154 - Festival of Sins (VI)
- Chapter 153 - Festival of Sins (V)
- Chapter 152 - Festival of Sins (IV)
- Chapter 151 - Festival of Sins (III)
- Chapter 150 - Festival of Sins (II)
- Chapter 149 - Festival of Sins (I)
- Chapter 148 - Great Questions (III)
- Chapter 147 - Great Questions (II)
- Chapter 146 - Great Questions (I)
- Chapter 145 - Aegis of Infinity (III)
- Chapter 144 - Aegis of Infinity (II)
- Chapter 143 - Aegis of Infinity (I)
- Chapter 142 - Shock and Awe (II)
- Chapter 141 - Shock and Awe (I)
- Chapter 140 - Northward (II)
- Chapter 139 - Northward (I)
- Chapter 138 - Tensions (V)
- Chapter 137 - Tensions (IV)
- Chapter 136 - Tensions (III)
- Chapter 135 - Tensions (II)
- Chapter 134 - Tensions (I)
- Chapter 133 - Echoes (IX)
- Chapter 132 - Echoes (VIII)
- Chapter 131 - Echoes (VII)
- Chapter 130 - Echoes (VI)
- Chapter 129 - Echoes (V)
- Chapter 128 - Echoes (IV)
- Chapter 127 - Echoes (III)
- Chapter 126 - Echoes (II)
- Chapter 125 - Echoes (I)
- Chapter 124 - Choices in Life (VI)
- Chapter 123 - Choices in Life (V)
- Chapter 122 - Choices in Life (IV)
- Chapter 121 - Choices in Life (III)
- Chapter 120 - Choices in Life (II)
- Chapter 119 - Choices in Life (I)
- Chapter 118 - Silence (III)
- Chapter 117 - Silence (II)
- Chapter 116 - Silence (I)
- Chapter 115 - Fading Traces (VII)
- Chapter 114 - Fading Traces (VI)
- Chapter 113 - Fading Traces (V)
- Chapter 112 - Fading Traces (IV)
- Chapter 111 - Fading Traces (III)
- Chapter 110 - Fading Traces (II)
- Chapter 109 - Fading Traces (I)
- Chapter 108 - Spiritwood Grove (VI)
- Chapter 107 - Spiritwood Grove (V)
- Chapter 106 - Spiritwood Grove (IV)
- Chapter 105 - Spiritwood Grove (III)
- Chapter 104 - Spiritwood Grove (II)
- Chapter 103 - Spiritwood Grove (I)
- Chapter 102 - When the Heavens Weep (VII)
- Chapter 101 - When the Heavens Weep (VI)
- Chapter 100 - When the Heavens Weep (V)
- Chapter 99 - When the Heavens Weep (IV)
- Chapter 98 - When the Heavens Weep (III)
- Chapter 97 - When the Heavens Weep (II)
- Chapter 96 - When the Heavens Weep (I)
- Chapter 95 - Spirit Sage (II)
- Chapter 94 - Spirit Sage (I)
- Chapter 93 - Art of Survival (IV)
- Chapter 92 - Art of Survival (III)
- Chapter 91 - Art of Survival (II)
- Chapter 90 - Art of Survival (I)
- Chapter 89 - Virtues of a Master (IV)
- Chapter 88 - Virtues of a Master (III)
- Chapter 87 - Virtues of a Master (II)
- Chapter 86 - Virtues of a Master (I)
- Chapter 85 - The Eternal Veil (VII)
- Chapter 84 - The Eternal Veil (VI)
- Chapter 83 - The Eternal Veil (V)
- Chapter 82 - The Eternal Veil (IV)
- Chapter 81 - The Eternal Veil (III)
- Chapter 80 - The Eternal Veil (II)
- Chapter 79 - The Eternal Veil (I)
- Chapter 78 - Upon the World (III)
- Chapter 77 - Upon the World (II)
- Chapter 76 - Upon the World (I)
- Chapter 75 - Tiny Parts of the Whole (II)
- Chapter 74 - Tiny Parts of the Whole (I)
- Chapter 73 - The Tales Woven (III)
- Chapter 72 - The Tales Woven (II)
- Chapter 71 - The Tales Woven (I)
- Chapter 70 - Fragments of Lives Gone (II)
- Chapter 69 - Fragments of Lives Gone (I)
- Chapter 68 - Internal Rot (III)
- Chapter 67 - Internal Rot (II)
- Chapter 66 - Internal Rot (I)
- Chapter 65 - Long Tao’s Fun Adventure (II)
- Chapter 64 - A Boy’s Struggles (II)
- Chapter 63 - A Boy’s Struggles (I)
- Chapter 62 - Long Tao’s Fun Adventure (I)
- Chapter 61 - A Little Respite
- Chapter 60 - Songs of Prelude (III)
- Chapter 59 - Songs of Prelude (II)
- Chapter 58 - Songs of Prelude (I)
- Chapter 57 - Greedy Justice (III)
- Chapter 56 - Greedy Justice (II)
- Chapter 55 - Greedy Justice (I)
- Chapter 54 - Tethers of Neverwhere (II)
- Chapter 53 - Tethers of Neverwhere (I)
- Chapter 52 - Declaration of War (II)
- Chapter 51 - Declaration of War (I)
- Chapter 50 - Windfall (II)
- Chapter 49 - Windfall (I)
- Chapter 48 - Antechamber (IV)
- Chapter 47 - Antechamber (III)
- Chapter 46 - Antechamber (II)
- Chapter 45 - Antechamber (I)
- Chapter 44 - Hidden Monsters (III)
- Chapter 43 - Hidden Monsters (II)
- Chapter 42 - Hidden Monsters (I)
- Chapter 41 - Betting & Competing (VI)
- Chapter 40 - Betting & Competing (V)
- Chapter 39 - Betting & Competing (IV)
- Chapter 38 - Betting & Competing (III)
- Chapter 37 - Betting & Competing (II)
- Chapter 36 - Betting & Competing (I)
- Chapter 35 - Days Mundane (II)
- Chapter 34 - Days Mundane (I)
- Chapter 33 - Vast-Body Art (IV)
- Chapter 32 - Vast-Body Art (III)
- Chapter 31 - Vast-Body Art (II)
- Chapter 30 - Vast-Body Art (I)
- Chapter 29 - Struggles of the Poor (III)
- Chapter 28 - Struggles of the Poor (II)
- Chapter 27 - Struggles of the Poor (I)
- Chapter 26 - To Be a Master (V)
- Chapter 25 - To Be a Master (IV)
- Chapter 24 - To Be a Master (III)
- Chapter 23 - To Be a Disciple (II)
- Chapter 22 - To Be a Master (I)
- Chapter 21 - Vast-Body Dantian (IV)
- Chapter 20 - Vast-Body Dantian (III)
- Chapter 19 - Vast-Body Dantian (II)
- Chapter 18 - Vast-Body Dantian (I)
- Chapter 17 - Plans Manifest(?) (III)
- Chapter 16 - Plans Manifest(?) (II)
- Chapter 15 - Plans Manifest(?) (I)
- Chapter 14 - Beg and Ye Shall Receive (II)
- Chapter 13 - Beg and Ye Shall Receive (I)
- Chapter 12 - Tests & Trials (IV)
- Chapter 11 - Tests & Trials (III)
- Chapter 10 - Tests & Trials (II)
- Chapter 9 - Tests & Trials (I)
- Chapter 8 - Spirit Stone Augmentation (III)
- Chapter 7 - Spirit Stone Augmentation (II)
- Chapter 6 - Spirit Stone Augmentation (I)
- Chapter 5 - Heart-Stitching Art (V)
- Chapter 4 - Heart-Stitching Art (IV)
- Chapter 3 - Heart-Stitching Art (III)
- Chapter 2 - Heart-Stitching Art (II)
- Chapter 1 - Heart-Stitching Art (I)
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